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Old Feb 15th, 2007, 07:08 PM   #41 (permalink)  
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Originally Posted by rabia rana
Raat azar kiyun na ban jaye??
Dil pay yadon nai teer tana hai
Nice one Rabia






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Old Feb 23rd, 2007, 09:56 AM   #42 (permalink)  
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Na chahatey huwey bhi chorr kar aana parra usey
wo imtihaan meiN na aatey huwey sawaaloN ki tarha tha


"Alif"






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Old Feb 23rd, 2007, 11:43 AM   #43 (permalink)  
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Unko ana na tha mager intezar ki sooli charha gaye
mere Khuda mein kis jurem ki saza pa rahahoon ab tak

Kaaf kitab wali







Ay kaash mujh mein quwwat`e purwaaz ho tu mein
Orhta howa barhoon teri jaaneb sooway harum
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Old Feb 24th, 2007, 06:15 PM   #44 (permalink)  
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Kar Rahay Hain hum, WafooN per Waffa

Jantay Hain Wu Hay Kitna Baa waffa

AadatooN ka kia hay jatay jayengii...

Arzoo hay hum bannaiN abb Bay waffa

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Old Feb 25th, 2007, 11:26 AM   #45 (permalink)  
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ab tu mujhay aik adat si hoye hai terri
jeena kiya ab tu hum khushi se mar bhi jaye gay
tujhay pakar bas ab khona nahi chahtay
zindagi ko teri mogodigi ki ab adat si ho gaye hai.







Life is short and we have never too much of time for gladdening the hearts of those who are traveling the dark journey with us. Oh be swift to love, make haste to be kind.
Always be kind and sweet!
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Old Feb 25th, 2007, 01:02 PM   #46 (permalink)  
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Ye Zindagi, Yeh ada, Yeh Sadgi, Ye Hayya

Unhain pay sajti hain yeh Dil-rubaiyaaN

Wu zulf mehki hui, Sada say ek chehray per

Meri Rooh main utri hay sub NishaniyaaN...






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Old Feb 27th, 2007, 10:06 AM   #47 (permalink)  
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Na gila hey tum se koie, na shikayet hey tum se koie
mera tu tum se ik rishta e jaan sub se siwaa hey






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Old Mar 6th, 2007, 02:38 AM   #48 (permalink)  
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Ya zindgi se ghum hai mila humein...!!!
ke mout se wabastagi achi lagi







In ankhoon kay ye zumurd hein teray liay...per tuo hay kahaan...... kia puta...(blush)
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Old Mar 7th, 2007, 02:53 AM   #49 (permalink)  
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My shair
Rudad e safer bus itni hai sajid
Tanha thay aa aiy so tanha chalay






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Old Mar 7th, 2007, 09:16 AM   #50 (permalink)  
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Welcome to Bait Bazi Miyan jee






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Old Mar 8th, 2007, 03:55 AM   #51 (permalink)  
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Thanks amal
My gazal
Dil kehnay ko masoom hai
lakin yeh kitna magmoom hai
tanhai phir bhi dasti hai
kehnay ko duniya hajoom hai






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Old Mar 9th, 2007, 11:04 AM   #52 (permalink)  
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yeh zulfain hain tumhari kaali ghatain
bul khati hain jaise samander ki lehrain

noon






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Old Mar 12th, 2007, 12:01 PM   #53 (permalink)  
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naam tera aksar likhti hoon apni haathli per
intezar karti hoon in diyoon kay jaltey tak.
next taay






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Old Mar 12th, 2007, 12:51 PM   #54 (permalink)  
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thi naa umeed, ke humaray muqaddar mein haar bhi ho kabhi
jo jeet lay maidan, woh khilari maidan mein hi naa utar sakey

next: ye






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Old Mar 14th, 2007, 05:13 AM   #55 (permalink)  
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ye aur baat kay milna nahi hay mumkin abhi
magar kabhi na milo zeest main aisa bhee nahii

next:ye






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Old Mar 14th, 2007, 11:38 AM   #56 (permalink)  
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^ I think pehley bhi aap ney ye sheir ya ghazal post ki hey, looks familiar.






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Old Mar 14th, 2007, 12:47 PM   #57 (permalink)  
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I might have done it - naraaz tu na hooN....






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Old Mar 14th, 2007, 12:57 PM   #58 (permalink)  
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OK another one 4rm ye:

Yahan Koi Bhee Manzil Nahi

Rehnumaa'ooN Ka Kia Faida

Jub Zubaanoo'N Pay Tallay Perday

Zindagani Ka Kia Faida

Mujhay ghazal likhnay ka qareena nahi aataaaaa....







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Old Mar 16th, 2007, 08:55 AM   #59 (permalink)  
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^ I did not mean that fara. It was just in my mind for being an impressive verse. That's it.
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Ik khaof koi anjaana sa meri aankh meiN rehta hey har dam
merey khaab tabhi to raat-o-din be'cheiN bhataktey rehtey heiN


"Noon"






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Old Mar 25th, 2007, 04:56 PM   #60 (permalink)  
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nazr swal ban kr uthti hai.........
itni is dil mai beqarari hai...........







nigah e ishq ko itna tu mohtaram kerday
guzar gay hain jo lamhay unhay baham kerday
taras rahi hon koi maa sa meherban wajood
DUA E NOOR parhay or mujh pay dam kerday
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