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Old Mar 31st, 2007, 03:47 AM   #61 (permalink)
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yaqeen gar nahi tum ko to poch lo meray yaaron say
batain karnay lag gaya hon ab to main deewaron say

wo din ab to hawa huay jab seh laita tha saray dard
ab to darr sa jata hon, main purkaif nazaron say






Ussay kaho ke bohat na'murad shay hai junoo'n
Ussay kaho ke mujhe hai bohat junoo'n uss ka
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Old Apr 2nd, 2007, 02:17 AM   #62 (permalink)
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yehi dil tha mera chara gar
bichra jub ujaar si raat mein

meri nigah wahein ruk gai
guzra jub woh kisi shaam mein

"NOON"






~~...~~Naam gum jaey ga
chehra yeh badal jaey ga
MERI AWAAZ HI PEHCHAN HAI
gr yaad rahey~~...~~
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Old Apr 3rd, 2007, 01:45 PM   #63 (permalink)
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Naa tha koi munasif wahan, jahan hum thay
keh shaam aur raat ka koi faraq bhi hota

next: Alif
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Old May 2nd, 2007, 01:58 PM   #64 (permalink)
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umeed thi kay roshan rahain gey teri yadon kay chiraagh
shab-e-hijr main issi aas pay dairaa lagayaa hum nain
"noon"

fil-badee bola hai






yaaN kay sapaid-o-seh maiN hum ko, dakhal jo hai so itna hai
raat ko ro ro subhu kiya, ya din ko jooN tooN shaam kiya
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Old May 11th, 2007, 02:19 AM   #65 (permalink)
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Nahi karta intazaaar WAQT! kesi ka
mai WAQt ke is ravish ko badalna chahta hon

"noon"







haaan mai wohi shaksh hon
dil mai jis k
koi b tamna nai baqi
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Old May 15th, 2007, 08:04 AM   #66 (permalink)
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Nahi karta intazaaar WAQT! kesi ka
mai WAQt ke is ravish ko badalna chahta hon

"noon"
na kiya ker junoo'n samay ko roknay ka
yeh behta drya hey, behta he rahy ga
teri be-rukhii se na wo lot key aye ga kabhi
wo to badal hey, sada chalta he rahy ga.



"ALIF"






Ik haqeeqat hee sahi,Firdous mein hooro'n ka wajood
Husn-e insa'n se nimatt loon to waha'n tak socho'n
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Old May 16th, 2007, 08:30 AM   #67 (permalink)
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intiazar un ka faqat karty hain...........
aisay ankhon mai laho bharty hain.........
nazar lgay na unki shokhi ko........
aik nazar daikhny se darty hain.............






nigah e ishq ko itna tu mohtaram kerday
guzar gay hain jo lamhay unhay baham kerday
taras rahi hon koi maa sa meherban wajood
DUA E NOOR parhay or mujh pay dam kerday
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Old May 16th, 2007, 08:59 AM   #68 (permalink)
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intiazar un ka faqat karty hain...........
aisay ankhon mai laho bharty hain.........
nazar lgay na unki shokhi ko........
aik nazar daikhny se darty hain.............
Tera intzar me ye ankhen ab tak soye nahi,
eak arsa sa ya hansi ya royi nahi,
tumsa bas eak bat kahni haine,
tum ho accha par asa jasa koi nahi..................BASS TERA INTZAR........

very nice PS.






Zindagi Tujh Sey Har Ik Sans Pe Samjhota Karoo.n
Shouq Jeeney Ka Hai Mujh Ko Magar Itna Tu Nahi
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Old May 17th, 2007, 09:18 PM   #69 (permalink)
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yea jo lagta hay aaaj apna apna sa

wo rehta aik AJNABI hi to acha tha






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Old May 18th, 2007, 09:49 AM   #70 (permalink)
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AankhoN ke jharonkoN pe hoti hey koi dastak
lagta hey koi khuaab naya aaya hey merey ghar

"Rey"
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Old May 18th, 2007, 10:02 AM   #71 (permalink)
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Never tried this but lets give it a shot?

Rang merey khoon ka ho gya hai safaid zalim
khoon ke ashk jo rotey hain teri yaad main






Dil na-umeed tou nahi nakaam he tou hai
Lumbi hai gham ki shaam magar shaam hee tou hai
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Old May 26th, 2007, 01:08 AM   #72 (permalink)
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Never tried this but lets give it a shot?

Rang merey khoon ka ho gya hai safaid zalim
khoon ke ashk jo rotey hain teri yaad main
Nice try Jaan Leva






Kisi khabar ka na hona hi "Khushkhabri" hy
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Old May 26th, 2007, 01:10 AM   #73 (permalink)
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Socha Ham bhi taba azmai kr hi lain

Na os ki yad ko do dosh mery dost
Iron pills lo hemoglobin ki hy kami






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Old Jun 2nd, 2007, 05:58 AM   #74 (permalink)
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Yahee bohot hay keh bhoolay huway haiN hum unn ko
Woh yaad aaeN ge to dil hee dukhaa keh jaeN ge

Yeh tere shehr k log qabeela haiN vehshiyoN ka magar
HumaiN bhee zid hai keh inn ko mohabbet sikhaa keh jaeN ge
"Ye"
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Old Jun 4th, 2007, 01:19 PM   #75 (permalink)
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AankhoN ke jharonkoN pe hoti hey koi dastak
lagta hey koi khuaab naya aaya hey merey ghar

"Rey"
hmm Nice:-)






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Hum ney kaantoN ko bhi narmii sey chuhwaa hey aksar
log be-dard heiN PhooloN ko massal detay heiN
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Old Jun 5th, 2007, 09:15 AM   #76 (permalink)
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Yahee bohot hay keh bhoolay huway haiN hum unn ko
Woh yaad aaeN ge to dil hee dukhaa keh jaeN ge
Bohat umda Welcome to GS and Bait Baazi aanish :~)
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Old Jun 9th, 2007, 08:37 AM   #77 (permalink)
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Thank you Amal






"Bai'mehri-e-dunia ka gilaa hay teray lab par
Ab kasay btaauN tujhay meiN bhee nahiN tera"
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Old Jun 11th, 2007, 06:44 AM   #78 (permalink)
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Ye Naam Ye Maqaam Ye Pakeezgi-e-Rooh
Mujh Ko Hui Naseeb Darbaar Se Teray..






Main Pal Do Pal Ka Shayer Hoon
Pal Do Pal Meri Kahani Hai..
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Old Jun 14th, 2007, 05:05 AM   #79 (permalink)
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Ye baat samjhney mein umr guzar gai
jo chala jaaey wuh lout ke ata nahi hey


yahan kyon khamoshi ka raaj hey
Baitbazi PE ka apna sawaad hey:P

issliye Forum mein hulchul laaeiN sab






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Old Jun 14th, 2007, 05:33 AM   #80 (permalink)
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Yuun Aur Bhi Haseen Ho Jaye
Wo Ger, Udaas Ho Bethay..
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Old Jun 25th, 2007, 04:16 AM   #81 (permalink)
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yaaden kia cheez hain hum to dil bhi luta den ge
teri chahat main hum to dunya ko bhula den ge
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Old Jun 25th, 2007, 06:46 AM   #82 (permalink)
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^ sweet:~)
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Old Jun 25th, 2007, 08:38 AM   #83 (permalink)
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friends main jab bhi yahan koi apna sher post karne aati hon hamesha aik hi word milta ha "Y"
ab mere is word se zayada sher nahi hain so plz try to change that word!!!
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Old Jul 1st, 2007, 11:34 AM   #84 (permalink)
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yaaden kia cheez hain hum to dil bhi luta den ge
teri chahat main hum to dunya ko bhula den ge
ye bhi mausam ka asar hai meray dil per janan..............
mai jo sawan ki tarhan tujh pe barasna chahon..............

"noon'
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Old Jul 1st, 2007, 12:04 PM   #85 (permalink)
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Na Ker Iss Tarah Tu Meri Aarzu
Raigaan Jaye Gi Yeh Teri Justuju

'Wow'
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Old Jul 2nd, 2007, 11:57 AM   #86 (permalink)
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Na Ker Iss Tarah Tu Meri Aarzu
Raigaan Jaye Gi Yeh Teri Justuju

'Wow'
nice.......

WOHI US K SITAM, WOHI BAY RUKHI HAI.......
MAGAR DIL MAI WOHI AB TAK MAKEE'N HAI.............
"YAY"
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Old Jul 3rd, 2007, 07:46 AM   #87 (permalink)
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nice.......

WOHI US K SITAM, WOHI BAY RUKHI HAI.......
MAGAR DIL MAI WOHI AB TAK MAKEE'N HAI.............
"YAY"

This is nice rabia

YahaN aa ke kisi ney ab karna bhi kya hey
na yahaN hey andhera na hi roshni hey
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