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Old Sep 21st, 2007, 08:15 AM   #141 (permalink)  
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Uss Ki Aankhon Main Kuch Aisi Haya Hai Ya'Rub
Jese Masoom Se Bachay Ki Duaa Hoti Hai

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ye masoom sah chahra mera he
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Old Sep 21st, 2007, 09:35 AM   #142 (permalink)  
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Uss Ki Aankhon Main Kuch Aisi Haya Hai Ya'Rub
Jese Masoom Se Bachay Ki Duaa Hoti Hai

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After Rabia Rana's #103, this is the best posted in this thread. Time to salute you






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Old Sep 21st, 2007, 10:41 AM   #143 (permalink)  
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ye masoom sah chahra mera he
mere ankhon ka rang boht gehra he
LOL...........
han u r sooo sooo cute






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Old Sep 21st, 2007, 12:05 PM   #144 (permalink)  
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Yaas ke barrey samandar meiN ik aas ki kashti chotti si
toofaan ki taaqat andha-dhund aur meri hasti choti si
baadal ke biphrey toloN ko koi kesey jaa ke samjhaaey
is baarish meiN kaheiN beh na jae meri basti chotti si
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Old Sep 22nd, 2007, 12:48 AM   #145 (permalink)  
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After Rabia Rana's #103, this is the best posted in this thread. Time to salute you
Ohh GOD.. thnx Amal jee..






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Old Sep 22nd, 2007, 12:49 AM   #146 (permalink)  
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ye masoom sah chahra mera he
mere ankhon ka rang boht gehra he
Sho Shweet

chi chu meechu






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Old Sep 22nd, 2007, 12:50 AM   #147 (permalink)  
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Yaas ke barrey samandar meiN ik aas ki kashti chotti si
toofaan ki taaqat andha-dhund aur meri hasti choti si
baadal ke biphrey toloN ko koi kesey jaa ke samjhaaey
is baarish meiN kaheiN beh na jae meri basti chotti si
"Ye"
Pehla shair mujhe buhat acha laga.. its really very beautiful..






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Old Sep 22nd, 2007, 12:52 AM   #148 (permalink)  
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Ye Dil Majboor Kion Honay Laga Hai
Thakan Se Choor Kion Honay Laga Hai
Main Uss Ko Chahta Hoon Jee Se Lekin
Wo Mujh Se Duur Kion Honay Laga Hai

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Old Sep 24th, 2007, 02:44 PM   #149 (permalink)  
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Yaas ke barrey samandar meiN ik aas ki kashti chotti si
toofaan ki taaqat andha-dhund aur meri hasti choti si
baadal ke biphrey toloN ko koi kesey jaa ke samjhaaey
is baarish meiN kaheiN beh na jae meri basti chotti si
"Ye"
wah wah sahib... kaya baat hai
pehla shair to kamaal hai... bohat hi achay






yaaN kay sapaid-o-seh maiN hum ko, dakhal jo hai so itna hai
raat ko ro ro subhu kiya, ya din ko jooN tooN shaam kiya
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Old Sep 24th, 2007, 03:07 PM   #150 (permalink)  
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Yaas ke barrey samandar meiN ik aas ki kashti chotti si
toofaan ki taaqat andha-dhund aur meri hasti choti si
baadal ke biphrey toloN ko koi kesey jaa ke samjhaaey
is baarish meiN kaheiN beh na jae meri basti chotti si
"Ye"
fantastic.......khubsurat....
akhri misra parh ker meray zahan mai ay........
IS BARISH MAI BARBAD NA HO KAHIN MERI BASTI CHOTI SI.............






nigah e ishq ko itna tu mohtaram kerday
guzar gay hain jo lamhay unhay baham kerday
taras rahi hon koi maa sa meherban wajood
DUA E NOOR parhay or mujh pay dam kerday
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Old Sep 28th, 2007, 12:11 AM   #151 (permalink)  
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Dil yea jaab bi Udas hota hai
Tu mayray Asssh pass hota hai !
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Old Sep 28th, 2007, 12:40 AM   #152 (permalink)  
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Ye Naam, Ye Maqaam, Ye Pakeezgi-e-Rooh
Mujh Ko Hui Naseeb Darbaar Se Teray

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Old Sep 28th, 2007, 04:33 AM   #153 (permalink)  
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Ye Naam, Ye Maqaam, Ye Pakeezgi-e-Rooh
Mujh Ko Hui Naseeb Darbaar Se Teray

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awesome Ahmer...........
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Old Sep 28th, 2007, 09:21 AM   #154 (permalink)  
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fantastic.......khubsurat....
akhri misra parh ker meray zahan mai ay........
IS BARISH MAI BARBAD NA HO KAHIN MERI BASTI CHOTI SI.............
I liked your suggestion rabia rana It's fitting well. Thanx






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Old Sep 28th, 2007, 09:25 AM   #155 (permalink)  
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Ye Naam, Ye Maqaam, Ye Pakeezgi-e-Rooh
Mujh Ko Hui Naseeb Darbaar Se Teray

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Ye taqdeer ki heiN chaaleiN ke badli hui hey baazi
jo mera chaara'gar tha meiN usi ka hooN nishaana

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Old Oct 2nd, 2007, 11:00 AM   #156 (permalink)  
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Hota hay barray sheh'ron mein yeh sub
Chara'gar ka fysla, yeh hijr or yeh shub

Adab

"bey"






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Old Oct 11th, 2007, 01:04 AM   #157 (permalink)  
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Bay'Wajha Ki Ummeedain Saans Baandhay Rakhti Hain
Warna Hum Ko Mernay Main, Dair Kitni Lagti Hai

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Old Oct 11th, 2007, 01:27 AM   #158 (permalink)  
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Yey amal kee mehfil hey, humdemee ka ujala
wohh zahir na bhi ho, wohh hey tow mager

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Difference between God and humankind: God can say, 'be', and it becomes, but humankind has to act on what it says.
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Old Oct 11th, 2007, 01:30 AM   #159 (permalink)  
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Raaz Ro'ker Na Apna Bataya Karo
Muskura Ker Ghamo'n Ko Chhupaya Karo

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Old Oct 11th, 2007, 02:36 AM   #160 (permalink)  
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Woh ache bache alag hi hote hain
ba'N ba'N bache to rote rehte hein

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