 |
|
Jan 19th, 2007, 08:31 AM
|
#1 (permalink)
|
|
Senior Member
Join Date: Aug 7, 2000 - 6:00 am
Posts: 6,884
|
Bait Baazi — Personal Edition is back. It's a modified version of Bait Baazi for Sho'ra-e-Gupshup with a simple difference of poster being the author! Unlike the Intikhaab's Bait Baazi, work of others is not allowed here AT ALL. To exactly match the theme of this forum — please post your own aashaar only! Every participant is requested to please strictly adhere to this restriction or otherwise the fun will go. That's all guys 
|
|
|
|
Jan 19th, 2007, 08:35 AM
|
#2 (permalink)
|
|
Senior Member
Join Date: Aug 7, 2000 - 6:00 am
Posts: 6,884
|
Lamha khushi ka ho ya gharri dil dukhaaney ki
usey har baat pe aadat thi muskuraaney ki
morr judaai ka aaya to toot ke roney laga
hum ney koshish to bohat ki usey samjhaney ki
"Ye"
|
|
|
|
|
Jan 19th, 2007, 10:55 AM
|
#3 (permalink)
|
|
logged out
Join Date: Jul 7, 1998 - 5:00 am
Location: Rehnay ko Ghar naheeN hai, PF jahaaN hamaaraa
Posts: 70,885
|
last sher of my new poem:
Yeh Naa-pe'd Ishq kay roz-o-Shab
Woh Piyaar kee shaam deewaani see
Ye
|
|
|
|
|
Jan 19th, 2007, 11:22 AM
|
#4 (permalink)
|
|
Senior Member
Join Date: Aug 7, 2000 - 6:00 am
Posts: 6,884
|
Quote:
|
Originally Posted by Anwaar Qureshi
last sher of my new poem:
Yeh Naa-pe'd Ishq kay roz-o-Shab
Woh Piyaar kee shaam deewaani see
Ye
|
Looks very promising...baaqi ki poem kahaN hey bhai??? :~)
|
|
|
|
|
Jan 19th, 2007, 11:24 AM
|
#5 (permalink)
|
|
logged out
Join Date: Jul 7, 1998 - 5:00 am
Location: Rehnay ko Ghar naheeN hai, PF jahaaN hamaaraa
Posts: 70,885
|
as always, in my journal
“Quite often good things have hurtful consequences. There are instances of men who have been ruined by their money or KILLED by their COURAGE.” ~Aristotle
|
|
|
|
|
Jan 20th, 2007, 07:19 AM
|
#6 (permalink)
|
|
Senior Member
Join Date: Aug 7, 2000 - 6:00 am
Posts: 6,884
|
Yak'dam sey aa jatey heiN ik saath kai aazaab
museebatoN ka wesey koi mosam nahi hota
zillat aur ruswai bas reh jaati hey ik shanaakht
haarey huwey lashkar ka koi parcham nahi hota
"Alif"
|
|
|
|
|
Jan 20th, 2007, 12:57 PM
|
#7 (permalink)
|
|
Senior Member
Join Date: Dec 31, 2006 - 11:07 am
Posts: 517
|
Ankhoon Ankhoon main hum tumhare ho ge
Bataon bataon main tum hamare ho ge
(YE)
|
|
|
|
|
Jan 21st, 2007, 05:48 PM
|
#8 (permalink)
|
|
Senior Member
Join Date: Aug 7, 2000 - 6:00 am
Posts: 6,884
|
Ye taqdeer ki heiN chaaleiN ke badli hui hey baazi
jo mera chaara-gar tha meiN usi ka hooN nishaana
|
|
|
|
|
Jan 25th, 2007, 07:22 AM
|
#9 (permalink)
|
|
Senior Member
Join Date: Aug 7, 2000 - 6:00 am
Posts: 6,884
|
Ab yahaaN kis ney guzarna hey Amal saari raat
tum chiraagoN ko jalaa kar yuN na beittha karo
"Wao"
|
|
|
|
|
Jan 25th, 2007, 08:20 AM
|
#10 (permalink)
|
|
Senior Member
Join Date: Aug 7, 2000 - 6:00 am
Posts: 6,884
|
Wafa ki ik khuwahish thi wafa ke siley meiN
kon hey jo mohabbat ka sila maang'taa nahi
jeeney ki talab meiN martey heiN baar baar
kuch logoN ka muqaddar kabhi jaag'taa nahi
"Ye"
|
|
|
|
|
Jan 25th, 2007, 08:24 AM
|
#11 (permalink)
|
|
Senior Member
Join Date: Aug 7, 2000 - 6:00 am
Posts: 6,884
|
Yaas ho ke aas ho ke janm-o-janam ki piyaas ho
khud kisi ke qareeb ho ya koi dil ke paas ho
kya duwaeiN maangni taqeer sey haalaat ki
agar kisi ko kushi ka koi lamha na raas ho
"wao"
Last edited by Amal; Jan 25th, 2007 at 09:22 AM..
|
|
|
|
|
Jan 25th, 2007, 08:34 AM
|
#12 (permalink)
|
|
Junior Member
Join Date: Nov 3, 2003 - 4:12 am
Posts: 90
|
waqt milney pe shaaid lout aaey wuh bhi
tum dil ki baat sar-e-aam yun na likha karo
sheir kuch sahi nahi bana par whatever:-)
|
|
|
|
|
Jan 26th, 2007, 08:12 AM
|
#13 (permalink)
|
|
Senior Member
Join Date: Aug 7, 2000 - 6:00 am
Posts: 6,884
|
Very nice Pakeeza 
Wo falak ko tak ke karney lagi mojzoN ki baat
meiN sochney laga umeed ki ye soghaat aakhri hey
meiN ney kaha ab aas ka naya kheil kya kheileiN
ke khuwaahishoN ki bisaat par ye maat aakhri hey
"Ye"
|
|
|
|
|
Jan 26th, 2007, 11:15 AM
|
#14 (permalink)
|
|
$@j@n k! d33w@n!
Join Date: Nov 10, 2006 - 12:42 pm
Location: *h@r j@g@*lekin k@h!n bh! n@h!*
Posts: 4,258
|
insha_ji yeh aap ne kab likha tha shair   tussi te bade budhe nikle 
Us Ka Milna Hee Muqadar Main Na Tha Warna,
Hum Ne Kya kuch Nahin Khoya USEY Paney K Liye
LoV£ 0NlY HapP3N$ OnC3.. R£$t 1$ Ju$t l!f£.. :)
|
|
|
|
|
Jan 26th, 2007, 11:42 AM
|
#15 (permalink)
|
|
Senior Member
Join Date: May 14, 2003 - 2:56 pm
Posts: 515
|
ye duniya yeh mehfil mere kaam ki nahi
kis ko sunaon haal dile be karar ka
bujhta howa howa charagh hoon apne mizar ka
A
bus daikh lo 
Insha uncle ye kaam yahaaN nahi chaley ga. Read the post#1
Last edited by Amal; Jan 26th, 2007 at 01:00 PM..
|
|
|
|
|
Jan 29th, 2007, 09:01 AM
|
#16 (permalink)
|
|
Senior Member
Join Date: Aug 7, 2000 - 6:00 am
Posts: 6,884
|
Ye sochtey huwey so gaya ik bhooka be'chaara
chand dinoN ke faaqoN sey koi marta nahi hey!
"Ye"
|
|
|
|
|
Jan 29th, 2007, 09:05 AM
|
#17 (permalink)
|
|
Senior Member
Join Date: May 14, 2003 - 2:56 pm
Posts: 515
|
Well is there an editing option here
Ay kaash mujh mein quwwat`e purwaaz ho tu mein
Orhta howa barhoon teri jaaneb sooway harum
|
|
|
|
|
Jan 31st, 2007, 07:04 PM
|
#18 (permalink)
|
|
Senior Member
Join Date: Aug 7, 2000 - 6:00 am
Posts: 6,884
|
^ I hope you would have found the Edit button by now :~)
Ye duwaaeiN saari ye sadaaeiN saari, ye man'natoN ke chiraagh saarey
inhey rah'guzar meiN saja ke har shab, tu kis ko takta hey be'khudi meiN!
"Noon"
|
|
|
|
|
Jan 31st, 2007, 10:45 PM
|
#19 (permalink)
|
|
Moderator Poetry Forum
Join Date: Nov 9, 2000 - 1:00 am
Posts: 7,788
|
Quote:
|
Originally Posted by Amal
^ I hope you would have found the Edit button by now :~)
Ye duwaaeiN saari ye sadaaeiN saari, ye man'natoN ke chiraagh saarey
inhey rah'guzar meiN saja ke har shab, tu kis ko takta hey be'khudi meiN!
"Noon" |
v nice one
~mujhaY kis jurm ki saza mili k meRi rooh taak hai thaki huwi maiN apni jaga se hila nahi meRi saans phiR be ukhaR gaye~
|
|
|
|
|
Feb 1st, 2007, 05:38 AM
|
#20 (permalink)
|
|
Junior Member
Join Date: Nov 3, 2003 - 4:12 am
Posts: 90
|
Naqsh bantey heiN bigarr jaatey heiN
jaesey log mil ke bicharr jaatey heiN
|
|
|
|
| Thread Tools |
|
|
| Display Modes |
 Linear Mode
|
Posting Rules
|
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts
HTML code is On
|
|
|
All times are GMT -5. The time now is 03:38 AM.
|
|
|
gupshup
unplugged
society
arts & cul
features
services
