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Old Jan 19th, 2007, 08:31 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Bait Baazi — Personal Edition is back. It's a modified version of Bait Baazi for Sho'ra-e-Gupshup with a simple difference of poster being the author! Unlike the Intikhaab's Bait Baazi, work of others is not allowed here AT ALL. To exactly match the theme of this forum — please post your own aashaar only! Every participant is requested to please strictly adhere to this restriction or otherwise the fun will go. That's all guys






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Old Jan 19th, 2007, 08:35 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Lamha khushi ka ho ya gharri dil dukhaaney ki
usey har baat pe aadat thi muskuraaney ki
morr judaai ka aaya to toot ke roney laga
hum ney koshish to bohat ki usey samjhaney ki

"Ye"
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Old Jan 19th, 2007, 10:55 AM   #3 (permalink)
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last sher of my new poem:

Yeh Naa-pe'd Ishq kay roz-o-Shab
Woh Piyaar kee shaam deewaani see

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Old Jan 19th, 2007, 11:22 AM   #4 (permalink)
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last sher of my new poem:

Yeh Naa-pe'd Ishq kay roz-o-Shab
Woh Piyaar kee shaam deewaani see

Ye
Looks very promising...baaqi ki poem kahaN hey bhai??? :~)
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Old Jan 19th, 2007, 11:24 AM   #5 (permalink)
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as always, in my journal






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Ruu'-e-Ufuq pe Subh kaY aaaaasaaaaar dekhnaaaaaa
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Old Jan 20th, 2007, 07:19 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Yak'dam sey aa jatey heiN ik saath kai aazaab
museebatoN ka wesey koi mosam nahi hota
zillat aur ruswai bas reh jaati hey ik shanaakht
haarey huwey lashkar ka koi parcham nahi hota

"Alif"
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Old Jan 20th, 2007, 12:57 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Ankhoon Ankhoon main hum tumhare ho ge
Bataon bataon main tum hamare ho ge

(YE)
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Old Jan 21st, 2007, 05:48 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Ye taqdeer ki heiN chaaleiN ke badli hui hey baazi
jo mera chaara-gar tha meiN usi ka hooN nishaana
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Old Jan 25th, 2007, 07:22 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Ab yahaaN kis ney guzarna hey Amal saari raat
tum chiraagoN ko jalaa kar yuN na beittha karo
"Wao"
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Old Jan 25th, 2007, 08:20 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Wafa ki ik khuwahish thi wafa ke siley meiN
kon hey jo mohabbat ka sila maang'taa nahi
jeeney ki talab meiN martey heiN baar baar
kuch logoN ka muqaddar kabhi jaag'taa nahi

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Old Jan 25th, 2007, 08:24 AM   #11 (permalink)
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Yaas ho ke aas ho ke janm-o-janam ki piyaas ho
khud kisi ke qareeb ho ya koi dil ke paas ho
kya duwaeiN maangni taqeer sey haalaat ki
agar kisi ko kushi ka koi lamha na raas ho



"wao"






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Old Jan 25th, 2007, 08:34 AM   #12 (permalink)
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waqt milney pe shaaid lout aaey wuh bhi
tum dil ki baat sar-e-aam yun na likha karo

sheir kuch sahi nahi bana par whatever:-)
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Old Jan 26th, 2007, 08:12 AM   #13 (permalink)
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Very nice Pakeeza


Wo falak ko tak ke karney lagi mojzoN ki baat
meiN sochney laga umeed ki ye soghaat aakhri hey
meiN ney kaha ab aas ka naya kheil kya kheileiN
ke khuwaahishoN ki bisaat par ye maat aakhri hey

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Old Jan 26th, 2007, 11:15 AM   #14 (permalink)
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insha_ji yeh aap ne kab likha tha shair tussi te bade budhe nikle






~:~Jag ne cheena mujh se, mujhe jo bhi laga pyara~:~
~:~ Sab jeeta kiye mujh se main har dam hi haara ~:~
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Old Jan 26th, 2007, 11:42 AM   #15 (permalink)
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ye duniya yeh mehfil mere kaam ki nahi
kis ko sunaon haal dile be karar ka
bujhta howa howa charagh hoon apne mizar ka

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bus daikh lo ;)

Insha uncle ye kaam yahaaN nahi chaley ga. Read the post#1






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Old Jan 29th, 2007, 09:01 AM   #16 (permalink)
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Ye sochtey huwey so gaya ik bhooka be'chaara
chand dinoN ke faaqoN sey koi marta nahi hey!

"Ye"
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Old Jan 29th, 2007, 09:05 AM   #17 (permalink)
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Well is there an editing option here






Ay kaash mujh mein quwwat`e purwaaz ho tu mein
Orhta howa barhoon teri jaaneb sooway harum
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Old Jan 31st, 2007, 07:04 PM   #18 (permalink)
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^ I hope you would have found the Edit button by now :~)


Ye duwaaeiN saari ye sadaaeiN saari, ye man'natoN ke chiraagh saarey
inhey rah'guzar meiN saja ke har shab, tu kis ko takta hey be'khudi meiN!

"Noon"
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Old Jan 31st, 2007, 10:45 PM   #19 (permalink)
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^ I hope you would have found the Edit button by now :~)


Ye duwaaeiN saari ye sadaaeiN saari, ye man'natoN ke chiraagh saarey
inhey rah'guzar meiN saja ke har shab, tu kis ko takta hey be'khudi meiN!

"Noon"
v nice one






~mujhaY kis jurm ki saza mili k meRi rooh taak hai thaki huwi
maiN apni jaga se hila nahi meRi saans phiR be ukhaR gaye~
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Old Feb 1st, 2007, 05:38 AM   #20 (permalink)
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Naqsh bantey heiN bigarr jaatey heiN
jaesey log mil ke bicharr jaatey heiN
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Old Feb 1st, 2007, 06:02 AM   #21 (permalink)
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Ye sochtey huwey so gaya ik bhooka be'chaara


chand dinoN ke faaqoN sey koi marta nahi hey!



"Ye"
That is something






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Terii pakeeza nigahoN kii qasam humdum
Dil tou kya Rooh ney bhii chaaha hey tumhi ko
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Old Feb 1st, 2007, 10:43 AM   #22 (permalink)
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arz kia hey apni shairi me se ik shair Noon ke hawale se

Nigahain thien onki jhooki howin
meri saansain thi keh rooki howin
lehje mein unke ik irteaash howa
jub kaha mujhe tum se piyar howa

Alif






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Old Feb 2nd, 2007, 07:47 AM   #23 (permalink)
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NikamiJi and Pakeeza, thanx for the appreciation






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Old Feb 6th, 2007, 08:27 AM   #24 (permalink)
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Aey gheirat-e-momin tujhey jaagna hey aaj
ke ik aur Karbala ka tujhey saamna hey aaj
apnoN ki be'hisi ka gila phir kabhi sahi
qatil sey apna khoon-baha maangna hey aaj

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Old Feb 6th, 2007, 09:12 AM   #25 (permalink)
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jis lakir se humay dar lagta hai
wo hai dosti ki lakir
itnay kareeb mat aao
becharnay se dar lagta
tum pe tu bahrosa hai
bas apni takdeer se dar lagta hai!






Life is short and we have never too much of time for gladdening the hearts of those who are traveling the dark journey with us. Oh be swift to love, make haste to be kind.
Always be kind and sweet!
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Old Feb 6th, 2007, 09:20 AM   #26 (permalink)
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yeh mohabet bhi ajeb cheez hey Shah ji
kerti kuch hey or kehti kuch or hey

ye
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Old Feb 7th, 2007, 05:38 AM   #27 (permalink)
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yon tu sarkar se awam ko umeed nahi
phir bhi ik himmat e iltaja tu ki jaye






nigah e ishq ko itna tu mohtaram kerday
guzar gay hain jo lamhay unhay baham kerday
taras rahi hon koi maa sa meherban wajood
DUA E NOOR parhay or mujh pay dam kerday
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Old Feb 7th, 2007, 05:57 AM   #28 (permalink)
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yon tu sarkar se awam ko umeed nahi
phir bhi ik himmat e iltaja tu ki jaye
Thats good:-)






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Hum ney kaantoN ko bhi narmii sey chuhwaa hey aksar
log be-dard heiN PhooloN ko massal detay heiN
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Old Feb 7th, 2007, 05:58 AM   #29 (permalink)
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Aey gheirat-e-momin tujhey jaagna hey aaj


ke ik aur Karbala ka tujhey saamna hey aaj
apnoN ki be'hisi ka gila phir kabhi sahi

qatil sey apna khoon-baha maangna hey aaj



"Jeem"


Buhat khoob






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Old Feb 8th, 2007, 03:19 AM   #30 (permalink)
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Buhat khoob
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JO GHAIRAT E MOMIN HAI WOHI HAI KARBALA KI SHAN
WO SHAN K JIS PER HUI AAL E RUSUL(S.A.W) QURBAN
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