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Old May 3rd, 2007, 12:37 AM   #1 (permalink)  
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A sister is the one who makes life easier to live,
Whom you can share your likes and dislikes with.

She makes us feel comfortable when we are sad,
She suggests us the right way when we are bad.

She is more than any word can tell,
She holds us when we tend to fall.

She comes to know our problems through our eyes,
She is of course naughty but wise,
She is my life's sunrise.

My sister! You are the most beloved to me,
As you care so much for me!


Want some ? ...







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Old May 3rd, 2007, 08:40 PM   #2 (permalink)  
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Asslamo Alaikum!
logo dont think this was for one person alone but it was for others too ...

But for whom it was particularly for ... they know who they are ...






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Old May 4th, 2007, 08:49 PM   #3 (permalink)  
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awwwwww thas so sweet







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Old May 4th, 2007, 09:11 PM   #4 (permalink)  
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Yes my sister ...this was for just you ...






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Old May 12th, 2007, 02:14 AM   #5 (permalink)  
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That's a lovely poem fbi - thank you for sharing







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Old May 13th, 2007, 10:29 AM   #6 (permalink)  
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nice poem ap ne khud se likhi ?







~mujhaY kis jurm ki saza mili k meRi rooh taak hai thaki huwi
maiN apni jaga se hila nahi meRi saans phiR be ukhaR gaye~
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Old May 16th, 2007, 07:25 PM   #7 (permalink)  
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nice poem ap ne khud se likhi ?
ji haan .. aur thanks ....






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Old May 17th, 2007, 07:36 PM   #8 (permalink)  
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how sweet
& nicely written







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wooooooooooooow i didnt know this part of u FBI nice to know

hey sweets how lucky na







Us Ka Milna Hee Muqadar Main Na Tha Warna,
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Old Apr 27th, 2009, 07:32 PM   #10 (permalink)  
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Just felt like reading my old stuff ..






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oye fibu, this is such a lovely poem..

tum ne shairi kab se shuru ker di :0







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Old May 9th, 2009, 09:30 AM   #12 (permalink)  
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sooooooooooo nice
main yah apni sis ko send karongi zaroor
bahut khobsurat






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such a lovely poem..






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Old May 15th, 2009, 04:31 PM   #14 (permalink)  
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waao raza ...
jeety rahu ..







suoz-e-firaaq,yaas-o-alam,iztraab-o-shuoq
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Old Jun 8th, 2009, 12:16 AM   #15 (permalink)  
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So lovely poem. Thanks for the share.






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