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Nov 11th, 2007, 01:59 PM
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Moderator Poetry Forum
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Asalam u Alaikum !
So Here Is One Shair Of Mine Hope You Like It
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Mein Ne Kaha Apni Nazar Utaar Lijiye Ga
Muskura Kar Rakh Diya Meri Gardan Pe Khanjar
BeInG lonelY !!! sID !!!
Love is unconditional, relationships are not BeInG lOn3lY sId
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Nov 11th, 2007, 02:55 PM
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Senior Member
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v nice sharing BL keep it up...try to complete puri gazal
~mujhaY kis jurm ki saza mili k meRi rooh taak hai thaki huwi maiN apni jaga se hila nahi meRi saans phiR be ukhaR gaye~
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Nov 11th, 2007, 05:19 PM
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Channel Manager Arts & Culture
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bari qatil haseena thi koi 
The heart is the only broken instrument that works.
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Nov 14th, 2007, 07:44 AM
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very nice
...Jeena toh hai yahan....Jaisa bhee hai Jahan...
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Nov 14th, 2007, 12:44 PM
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Moderator Poetry Forum
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Thanks Nj shab n madiha 
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Nov 14th, 2007, 02:19 PM
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Waday Choudhry Sahib
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Shab-e-Hijar
bari qatil haseena thi koi |
aap ko kaisy pata kay haseena thi 
lonely unkal its nice
yaaN kay sapaid-o-seh maiN hum ko, dakhal jo hai so itna hai
raat ko ro ro subhu kiya, ya din ko jooN tooN shaam kiya
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Nov 16th, 2007, 12:01 AM
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Moderator Poetry Forum
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Thanks CG
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Nov 25th, 2007, 08:20 AM
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hummm
Meray Roz O Shab k Nisaab Main Meray Paas Apna To Kuch Nahi
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Nov 26th, 2007, 03:51 AM
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Be My Friend
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Mein Ne Kaha Apni Nazar Utaar Lijiye Ga
Muskura Kar Rakh Diya Meri Gardan Pe Khanjar
Bhai SID ghalti ho gai aap ka undoh naak she'r parh kar ..... bara truckoon wala she'r likh mara hay janab nay ......
Ma'zarat kay sath aap kay she'r key perody kar raha hoon .....
Mein Ne Kaha Apni Nazar Utaar Lijiye Ga
Muskara Kay Bolay "Tum Naheen Ho Kia Meray Sath"
Don't hate me because I'm smart, hate me because your girlfriend thinks I am .....
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Dec 1st, 2007, 05:44 PM
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Dil pr mat ly
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Kehna tha nazar utarny ko kaha hy Balli charhany ko nahi
PS: Nazar ky liy kala teeka lagya jata hai 
YAZEED-UN-Nisa!
Last edited by goodnews; Dec 1st, 2007 at 05:50 PM..
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Dec 2nd, 2007, 09:27 AM
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Moderator Poetry Forum
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Ab Ye to haseena par munhasir hai na woh nazar kaisay utaarti hai !
@ sannan sohbat ka asar hai jo aisa sher likh daala haseenayen majboor karti hain aaisa kuch likhany par 
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