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Dec 20th, 2007, 07:05 AM
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Dushwari jee aap kee ijazat say aap kay jawab main....
Ya zindagi hai kiya
Pahlay ya to samjahoo
Ya dharkan kisay kahtay hain
Ya tu bata laoo
Sans ka chalna hai kiya
Umer ka guzarna hai kiya
Ahsas ka hona hai kiya
Baat ka ghaoo hai kiya
Tara badalna hai kiya
Mara bekharna hai kiya
Jism ka mitna hai kiya
Rooh ka rahna hai kiya
Sans kay chalnay say
Dill kay dharaknay tak
Gar ya hai zindagi
Tu phir yoonn kahoo na
Ka Dilsay lartay hain
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Hijar main khoon rulatay ho kahaan hotay hoo
Loat kar koyoon nahi atay hoo kahan hotay hoo
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Dec 20th, 2007, 07:07 AM
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Eid Mubarak dilsay
Meray Roz O Shab k Nisaab Main Meray Paas Apna To Kuch Nahi
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Dec 20th, 2007, 09:40 AM
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No one..
Join Date: Apr 13, 2007
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Who cares, when em Hurt..
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Dec 20th, 2007, 11:07 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Azad
Eid Mubarak dilsay
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Aap ko behi eid mubarak hoo
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Dec 20th, 2007, 11:07 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by redidentity
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Thanks and Eid Mubarak
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Dec 20th, 2007, 11:27 AM
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No one..
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aap ko bhi EID MUBARAK..
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Dec 20th, 2007, 03:42 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Dilsay
Aap ko behi eid mubarak hoo
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khair mubarak! bhai dilsay kabhi bholay chae ka bhi poch liya karain.
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Dec 20th, 2007, 04:16 PM
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deikho Dilasay bhai, meiree poem ka setya naas na kero.
:>
2 lines were good though,
Ahsas ka hona hai kiya
Baat ka ghaoo hai kiya
since the rest is involuntary, but as humans capable of will power and responsibility of own actions, the two above are specifically necessary.
best,
Dushwari
Difference between God and humankind: God can say, 'be', and it becomes, but humankind has to act on what it says.
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Dec 21st, 2007, 01:14 AM
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Dushwari jee,
I would have easly send you PM no problem but let me clear things for you if someone gets inspired by something he/she has a right to say it and i did not just posted it and have mentioned that it is a reply..
I dont understand why you always have a negative approach to things... and i dont think you can stop anyone from writing.. yes you can comment but in a way the comments does not cross the lines not the way you did this time...
You saying ka mainay aap ke poem ka satiya naash kar diya there you are wrong your comments has done that job...
I hope this clears things from my side.. As much as I have known you through GS i am sure you will not be quite and will again say something it is ok i am ready for that...
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Originally Posted by Dushwari
deikho Dilasay bhai, meiree poem ka setya naas na kero.
:>
2 lines were good though,
Ahsas ka hona hai kiya
Baat ka ghaoo hai kiya
since the rest is involuntary, but as humans capable of will power and responsibility of own actions, the two above are specifically necessary.
best,
Dushwari
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Dec 22nd, 2007, 03:50 AM
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I want to delete one of my comments but i am not able... Just want to say sorry to all of you
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Dec 22nd, 2007, 09:43 AM
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v.nice 
Why are u sorry though? U say urself k Khush rahain! Be happy! 
To be a good doctor always start studying late for exams because.....
It teaches u how to manage TIME & tackle with EMERGENCIES!
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