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Old Dec 4th, 2008, 12:35 PM   #21 (permalink)  
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Brinjdar Saagar SaaHeb:
Aadaab,

Ek muddat ke ba'ad aap ko paRh rahii hooN. aap kee yeh naZ^m hameN bhi pasand aaYii hai jiske liYe dilee daad pesh e Khidmat hai.

Khuda kare zor e qalam aur ziyadah

Khair andesh
Zahida Raees Raji






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Old Dec 14th, 2008, 02:43 PM   #22 (permalink)  
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Raji saheba,
I was pleasantly surprised to see you here.And thanks a ton for the kind words of appreciation.I hope that the appreciation is genuine because one very respected person has written somewhere that people give their words of appreciation to my poems as a matter of courtesy.This is what i will never want for my Art.The mode of expression and the thoughts and emotions in my poems are very conscious.I can not change the fixed mindsets and their very rigid parameters of aesthetics.I hope the appreciation was heartfelt.
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Old Jan 8th, 2009, 01:54 PM   #23 (permalink)  
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Bekhudi


Ik mauj-e-samndar-e-kaynaat hai zindagi
Khud hi jawaab aur swaalaat hai zindagi

Khud ki talaash yeh safar-e-hyaat
Abhi din ki aarzu ab justju-e- raat

Kuch jaani anjaani raahon pay
UmroN kay qaafilay
Ghardish-e-doraaN main pinha manzilaiN
Kabhi manzil ka pa laina
Phir us say ukta jaanaa
Yeh shauq-e-manzil nahi
Shayud jeenay ka bus bahaanaa

Jab bar gayi bahut tanhai
Banaya phulsupha-e-khudai
But banayay banai azaanaiN
Phir sajaai rishton ki dukaanaiN

Jab jab bhi khud say uktaiya insaaN
Daur-e-wehshat main laut aayaa insaaN

Is hajoom-e-zindagi main tanha hai har koi
Bus girafat-e-khwaab-e-bahaanaa hai har koi

Ik bhatkan umr kay jaNgloN main
Liyay bekasi-e-namaloom diloN main
Har koi jiyay jaataa hai
Dard-o-masarrat kay ajab saNgam ko
Unwaan-e-zindgai diyay jaataa hai

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Meanings: mauj-e-samanadar-e-kaynaat-wave in the sea of universe,ghardish-e-dauraN-revolution(movement of time,Pinha-chupa hua,Ghirfat-e-khwaab-e-bahaanaa--caught in the web of deception






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Old Mar 28th, 2009, 04:03 PM   #24 (permalink)  
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Keemiya-2

Raat ki aankhoN maiN haiN raushni kay khwaab
Din ki nazar maiN aNdhayroN ka sakooN
Bus isi giraft maiN haiN hai ziNdagi ki rau
Aur farayboN pay palta hua iska fasooN
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FasooN-magic






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Old Mar 29th, 2009, 04:05 PM   #25 (permalink)  
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Keemiya-2

Raat ki aankhoN maiN haiN raushni kay khwaab
Din ki nazar maiN aNdhayroN ka sakooN
Bus isi giraft maiN haiN hai ziNdagi ki rau
Aur farayboN pay palta hua iska fasooN
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FasooN-magic
waah bahut khoob !!






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Old Apr 1st, 2009, 07:02 PM   #26 (permalink)  
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Sehar Say Sehar Tak

Afsurdgi pay paltay huay mery ayaam
Roz yaas ki siyaahioN maiN doob jaatay haiN
Phir shub wahi sum lay kar sehar tak mujhko jagaati hai
Phir tweel raatoN main teri yaad tanhaaiaN baraati hai
Phir meray geet tujhko dair tak bulaatay haiN
Phir maaniNd-i-roz
MaiN jaagta hooN aur taaroN ko neeNd aati hai

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Meanings: afsurgi-udaasi, ayaam-din,yaas- dukh,sum-zehar,taweel- laMbi, ManiNd-e-roz-har roz ki tarah






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Old Apr 3rd, 2009, 03:29 PM   #27 (permalink)  
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waah bahut khoob!!






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Old Apr 11th, 2009, 11:19 AM   #28 (permalink)  
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sadiyon se daba wo prem patra aaj tujhe bhej diya
mein apne haalaton se na dara jo dil ne kaha wohi kiya
ye deri kyon hui kaise bataun sulagate jigar ko kaise siya
sach kahoon poore jivan mein mein jiya to sirf tere khayalon mein jiya
tujhe aur jamana bhi chahta hai par meine hardam tera hi naam liya
mulla ne samjha kafir, logon ne deewane ka naam diya






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Old Apr 24th, 2009, 07:31 PM   #29 (permalink)  
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good one.thanks a lot.






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Old Apr 27th, 2009, 04:32 PM   #30 (permalink)  
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20 saal pehlay likhi eik nazm lay kar haazir hua hooN.Umeed hai pasaNd aayaygi.

APNAY BATAY KAY NAAM

NanhaiN pairoN pay dorta bachpan
HaNsta gaata muskurata bachpan

Teri kilkaarioN main sabaaN kay jhoNkay
Teri shokhi main bahaaroN kay aNdaaz
Teri udaasi say tarap jaayay kahkashaaN saari
Teri tutlahat main raagoN ka riyaaz

Koi Suqraat bhi kya teray zauq-e-talab kay aagay
Teri masti ki raqs maiN ho jaisay hyaat
Teray laboN pay khailti hai aisay shffaaf haNsi
Ki sharma jayay issay parioN ki bhi zaat

Tu hai meray jism-o-rooh ka kalaam
Teri ghardish main meri hasti ka nizaam
Tujhsay Hai masrrat kay phir raushan chiraagh
Teray irtiqa main nihaaN meray teerath-o-dhaam

Aur Ai meray lakht-e-jigar
Yeh hai khud say ahad mera
Ki na ban jayay baar tera
Yeh tamaam pyaar mera
Aur parwaazoN main teri
Na ho meri tamnnaoN ka beseraa
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Meanings:
Riyaaz-abhyaas(excercise),Zauq-e-talab-Quest to know
Raqs-dance, Saffaf-swach(clear,pure), Kalaam-rachna
Ghardish-parikrama(revolve),Nizaam-Vayvashta,bandobast
Massarat-khusi, Irtiqa-tarraki,development,NihaaN-nihit,chupa hua
Baar:bhaar






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Old May 31st, 2009, 04:52 PM   #31 (permalink)  
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Tzaad

YaadoN kay bawaNdar say uth rahaiN hai Takh_yul ki sar zamiN pay
Barq bau kay chamkta hai teri afsurda haNsee ka chehra
Honay lagi hai teray naaz-o-karam ki rimjhim
Meri takhleeq maiN main woh pehli barsaat si soundhi khusbu aa rahi hai

Tanha bahut tanha hai dil teray jaanay kay baad
SaMbhla nahi wajood shorishoN maiN bhi doob jaanay kay baad
Zamanaa to samjhtaa hai isay shauq-i-fitoor mera
Har chahray maiN agar dhooNdta hooN teray wajood ki parchaiNaN
Aur uqta kay uth aataa hooN phir apnay khyaaloN ki duniya maiN
Siyaah aur siyaah ho jaati haiN phir meri tanhaaiyaaN

Ab tu bani hai kisi ga_ir ki zindagi ka unwaaN
Ab teri raataiN uski baahoN main basi rehti haiN
Ab na us ulfat ki haqeeqat baqi
Phir bhi nadaan umeedaiN dil maiN baniN rehtiN haiN

Puchta hooN maiN aksar apni talkh raatoN say
Ki kya hai aqaayud-i-mehabbat ki asaas
Kya hai yeh rasoomaaat maiN lipta ik shuq-i-bekaar
Kya hai yeh ishq kay naam pay paltay huay pazmurda ahsaas

Kya hai yeh mehabbat yeh mehabbat ki tashheeer
Kadam bar kadam samjotoN ki besood taameer
Kya hai yeh jis-o-rooh kay alag alag meyaar
Kya hai parstish pay palta yeh falsafa-i-taqdeer

Thehar ab zauq-i-talab thehar
Aaj na yeh baat baat uthaa
Aaj ki raat barstaa hai gujishta mehabbat ka jaadoo
Aaa ki raat kuch na keh kuch na sunaa
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Meanings:Tzaad: Takraav
Takh_yul- Imagination(kalpana), Barq-lightening,Afsurda-Udaas, Takhleeq-rachna,creation
ShorishoN-kolahul(noise), Aqqayud-e-muhabbat-prem kay prati vishwaas,
Rassomaat- rasmaiN, Asaas-foundation, Pazmurda-half dead
Tashheer-Advertisement, Besood taameer-useless constrruction
Mayaar-parameters, Phalsupha-e-taqdeer-philosophy of fate
Gujishta-pas






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Old Jun 10th, 2009, 09:39 PM   #32 (permalink)  
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Tanhai

MaiN har chehray choN jay labhda haaN kuch
TaaN eh meri aawargi nahiN
Eh bhaal hai meray tassawar di moorat nuN-
ZiNdagi di bheer choN labhan di
JiuN JiuN maiN umar day meel-pathar laNgda haaN
UdaasiaN da registaan dil atay
Ahsaasaan tay hor vi taari hoi jaaNda hai
MaiN shayad oh saraapi roo h haaN-
JazbiaN da oh surajmukhi phul
Suraj jis toN akh churai hai
Atay jisnay suraj labhan di khatir-
DiviaaN vich vi jhaati laayi hai
Har chehra ik umeed daiN da hai-
Apnay pyaar nu labhan di
Har chehra suraj da bhulekha huNda hai
Par phair jad oh chehra vi-
Hor chehriaN varga nazar aunda hai
Udaasi da ik hor teela dil tay vadh jaaNda hai
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Old Jun 18th, 2009, 02:00 AM   #33 (permalink)  
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Ishq Da Vanjara

MaiN vanjara ishq da main chalaaN haddaaN paar
Meri boli peera kukdiaN ,dil 'ch zakhm hazaar
MaiN geetaN day laal lutaaNda
Tay haNju lavaN saMbhaal
YaadaaN da ik tokkar chukay
ChalaaN saalo-saal
Meri nazaraaN us zameen tay
Jithay supnay hul chalaan
MaiN labhaaN aisay baNdiaN
Jo meri sochaaN lain pachaan
Chalda ja vanjaaria milyga oh saNsaar
Haasay khaaviN chaanan peeveeN pyaar da kari shiNgaar
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Old Jun 21st, 2009, 05:49 PM   #34 (permalink)  
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WAQT-E-FURQAT

Yeh waqt-e-furqat kitna kathin hai meri jaaN
Hoga mushkil maanaa tha, magar itnaa mushkil
Socha bhi naa thaa

Woh chaNchal si khilkhilahat
Woh tumhari maNd maNd si muskaan
Woh tumharay badan say aatay bahaar kay jhoNkay
Woh tumhaari saadgi maiN daanaai kay imkaan

Woh tumhaaraa meri baahoN maiN duniya ko bhool jaanaa
Woh behtay ashkoN maiN laraztay laboN ka muskuraanaa
Woh tumhaari pal pal ko shiddat say jeenay ki chaah
Woh tumhaari nazar maiN phool say komal khwaaboN ki raah

Woh tumhaari dabdabaai aaNkhoN maiN unkahayay sawaal
Woh tumhaaray ghanay dasht say gasuoN ka jamaal
Woh tumhaaray hoNthoN ka tilsmee khumaar
Woh tumhaaraa mujh par beloss aitbaar

Bahut yaad aataa hai yeh sub meri jaaN
Aur yaad aataa hai bahut tumhaaraa woh-
"SUNO NA"
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Old Jun 25th, 2009, 04:50 AM   #35 (permalink)  
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Old Jun 25th, 2009, 05:17 AM   #36 (permalink)  
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Old Jun 25th, 2009, 08:06 PM   #37 (permalink)  
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I am thankful to both you for the kind words of appreciation.






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Old Jun 26th, 2009, 09:56 PM   #38 (permalink)  
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Vichaar

TooN ki haiN-
Day jaandaaN jo math kay rooh meri
SochaaN day kuch suchay moti
Na shakal huNdi na roop huNda pehlaaN tera
Jad vi saun lagda hai mera aapaa
Vaikh vaikh bheeraN day sutay chehray
TooN aauNda haiN ahsaasaaN tay ik nauNdar ban kay
Peer us wich tu roop banauNda
Mainu sirjanhaar bana kay
Aap tu bas akhar ban jaaNdaN
Oh waqt jad tu tay maiN ik-muk huNday
Kaash oh waqt ruk jayay
Jam jayay dhruv di barf-sil vaaNg
TaaN jo maiN na reh jaawaaN
Phir kal-mukalla
Sutay chahraiaN day shahar under
TaaN jay kitay maiN wi aakhar
VaaNg innaH sauN na jaawaaN neeNd sadeeveeN
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Old Jul 13th, 2009, 05:29 PM   #39 (permalink)  
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Teri yaad-chaar mausam

Hijar di tikhi dhuppay
Teri yaadaan di raitaaN tay
Sochaan chal kay-
GeetaaaN day chaalay sahay
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Gaayaa jad dardaaN da Tansen
Malhaar teriaN yaadaaN da
Meri "main" takdi reh gayi-
Var gayi badli haNjuaaN
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ZiNdagi da baagh udaas si
PehchaanaaN di rut jhardi gayi
Phul kirday rahy yadaaN day teri-
GeetaaN di zameen bhardi gayi
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Sochaan day jharnay vich-
DardaaN jad gotay laayay
Chuppi di is sardi ruttay-
Teri yaadaaN day jharnaatay chuttay
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Old Jul 15th, 2009, 04:46 PM   #40 (permalink)  
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