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Old Jul 27th, 2009, 01:44 PM   #41 (permalink)  
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Hadd-e-fikr say aagay

Swaal haiN jwaab haiN
Khwaab khwaab khwaab haiN
Halaal na haraam hai
Afqaar kay saraab haiN

Hyaat la-jwaab hai
Aur sabko na-gwaar hai
Hyaat la-hadood hai
Par rooh girftaar hai

Hyaat khud maqaam hai
Aur aadmi khwaar hai

Khwaab bhi yaqeen haiN
Yaqeen bhi to khwaab haiN
Swaal haiN jwaab haiN
Khwaab khwaab khwaab haiN
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Brijinder “Sagar”
Auckland, New Zealand

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Meanings:
Halaal—religiously approved
Haraam—anathema,religiousely not sanctioned
Saraab- Mirage
Afqaar—thoughts
Hyaat—life
La-hadood- without limits(boundaries)
Maqaam—Manzil
Lajawaab!






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Old Jul 28th, 2009, 08:39 AM   #42 (permalink)  
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Dharrkanon ke nasheb o faraz ko sanwara tha or bas,
Kaghaz pe dil ka bojh utara tha or bas!

Bas itna janta hun ke aawaz us ki thi,
Itna pata hai us ne pukara tha or bas!

Dunya ki fikar kya thi or zamane ka khof kya?
hum ko faqat khyal tumahara tha or bas!

chahton ke jahan main kuch faida ho na ho magr,
chahton ke junoon main sirf khasara tha or bas!

logon ne ussy meri muhabbat samajh lia Sagar.
wo mujh ko jan se pyara tha or bas!






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Old Jul 28th, 2009, 08:46 AM   #43 (permalink)  
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tha bohat khush jo bhula k mujhe,
aaj roya gally laga k mujhe.

us ne peahla swal ye poocha,
tum ko kesa laga ganwa k mujhe?

mujh ko pathar bna k kehta hai,
"chanda! dekho na muskara k mnjhe"

zindagi ne to aazmaya hai,
tum b dekh lo aazma k mujhe.

us ne rasta badal lia apna,
pyar ki rah par chala k mujhe.






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Old Jul 28th, 2009, 08:59 AM   #44 (permalink)  
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Palkon k band ko torr kar daman pe aa gira Faraz!

Ik aansoo mere sabar ki toheen kar gaya.






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Old Jul 31st, 2009, 01:52 AM   #45 (permalink)  
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Kya hai Zindagi?

Mai ka jadu bhara mast payaala hai
Ya ki tanhai kay seenay maiN laga khaNjar
Mehboob kay hoNtoN ki sheerni hai
Ya ki zar-o-zameeN kay khawaaboN ka naam
Har nafs maiN zinda hairat ki taazgi hai
Ya ki sub ka sham say ik thaka sa rishta?
Zindagi kisko kehtay haiN, dost??

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Old Aug 11th, 2009, 04:58 PM   #46 (permalink)  
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Sard-bedard mausam

Sard hai raat bahut
Chand say pighal-pighal rahi hai barf chandni
Aur utar rahi hai meray takhhyul ki vaadioN main
Meray khwaaboN kay jharnoN maiN
Meray armaanoN kay goshoN maiN
Kohra ban kay ghayray hai mujhay abr-e-tanhai
Aur yakhbasta sa ho gaya jaisay mera tamaam vajood
Lagta hai is baar
Ki garmi-e-jazbaat bhi bacha na payaygi ziNdagi meri
Is baar jo aya hai yeh sard-bedard mausam
Is baar yeh khatm nahi hoga kabhi.....

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Old Sep 4th, 2009, 01:10 AM   #47 (permalink)  
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Sazaa

Na raatoN ko hui naseeb apnay khwaaboN ki tabeer
Na din meray nay payaa apnay ujaalon ka humnashiN
Na mili sera-e-jahaaN main zeest ko thandi chaaNv
Na jazbaat meray nay paayaa aqs apna kahiN

Tu to tha mushtaaq haqeeqat ki gawaahi hai
Shiddat-e-khuloos magar bani teri tabaahi hai
Tunay gaRd main reh kar shaffafi kay geet gaayay
Ziqr gulshanoN kay teri barbat pay kiyuN ki aayay

Yeh jurm-e-intahha tamddun say hota nahi gawaraa
Tareekh kar rahi hai sadion say yeh ishaaraa

Aqeedat-o-takddus kay auhaam main thay jo mastoor
UriyaaN kar diayay tunay tehzeeb kay woh sub nasoor

Ab isliay ta-umr tanhaaion main teh
Tu mehfiloN say door parchaion main reh
Ja ab tera koi nahiN
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Meanings:
Mushtaaq-one who wants to know
Shiddat-e-khuloos-intensity
Shaffafi-pure
Barbat-a musical instument
Jurm-e-intaha-extreme sin
Tanddun-civilsation
Aqeedat-o-takddus--faith n pious
Auhaam-- veham(illusions)
Mastoor--chupay huay






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Old Sep 15th, 2009, 05:52 PM   #48 (permalink)  
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ALVIDA


Na tujh pay jafa ka koi ilzaam
Ma maiN apni ulfat pay sharamsaar
Tagaful na peshaymaani na koi shiqayat
Bus zindagi ko dekha apnay apnay andaz say humnay

MaiN ishq ko samjhta hooN zindgi ka muqaddar
Tunay muqaddar ko bus zindagi samjha
MaiN jin zulmatoN pay uthata raha barbat-i-baghaawat
Tunay unhiN aqaayud ko raushani samjha

MaiN banaataa hi rahaa haseeN khwaaboN kay gronday
Mujhko na tha pata ki tera guzar inmaiN kahaaN
Tu to dhooNdti phirti thi ik qafas sandli
Meray tas_svur maiN tha teray liyay ik azaad jahaaN

Main to chaahaa tha ki tum humkadam ho kay chalo
Tumnay virsay maiN magar paya hai aqeedat ka bharam
Meri ulfat to thi baraabar ki dosti
Teri ulfat rahi meri mohtaaj-i-karam

Meri tamanna thi ki tu mujhay "tu" ho kar kay milay
Tunay khudi ko apni magar biknay kay liayay paalaa tha
Meri hasrat ki tu isay apnay ahsaas maiN rakh kar kay jiyay
Toonay parstish kay liyay jisay ab talak saMbhaalaa tha

Na tujh say thi mujhay parstish ki aarzoo
Na kud mujhay tha shauq-i-aqeedat
MaiN tujh maiN dhooNdta phirta tha ik khud_dar mehboob
Aur tumko piyaari thiN apnay purkhoN ki viraasat
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Meanings: Taghaful- Disinterst(la-parwahi)
Zulmaton-AndairoN, Barbat-e-baghawat- begule of revolution, Aqayud- Vishwas,prinicples,
Qafus-cage, Mohtaaj-e-karam-at the mercy of my "Yes"
Shauq-e-aqeedat-tendency to rever(pooja)






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Old Oct 3rd, 2009, 04:12 PM   #49 (permalink)  
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Ishq


Ishq junooN bhi hai sanjeedgi bhi hai
Yeh hawis bhi hai pakeezgi bhi hai
Shokhi bhi hai ishq-
Baanki adaaoN pe lutnay ka naam bhi hai
Rooh-e-irtqa-e-dil-o-dimagh bhi-
Zindagi ko samjhnay ka naam bhi hai
Ishq masroofiat bhi fursat bhi hai
Ishq qurbat bhi aur furqat bhi hai
Ishq rif_at bhi aur wus_at bhi hai
Aur ishq kabhi faqt chahat bhi hai
Yeh masoomiyat bhi rikhshandgi bhi hai
Bosa hai to kabhi bandgi bhi hai
ZamiN bhi hai aur aasmaN bhi hai
Magar ufaq ka ismay nishaN bhi hai
Kabhi bistar ki salwaton sa-
To kabhi mandir ki moortoN sa
Kabhi uryaanioN ka shaida
To kabhi Meera-o-Mariam ki soortoN sa
Ishq rog bhi magar mudawa bhi hai
Ishq parastish bhi magar da_awa bhi hai

RishtoN say sada juda hai ishq
Isliyay hi bana khuda hai ishq
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Meaning:
Rooh-e-irtqa-e-dil-o-dimagh -ehsaas aur khyaaolon ki tarakki ki aatma
furqat-Judai.rif_at -uNchai, wus_at -vishaalta
rikhshandgi- masti,ufaq -Horizon,uryaanioN-nudity






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Old Oct 23rd, 2009, 07:15 PM   #50 (permalink)  
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Hijr-o-visaal



Fazaon ko phir vajeh si mil gayee mahakane ki
Afsurda badalon mein se chand phir muskuraya hai
Takhleeq meri mein phir aaney lagey hain shokhion ke dum
Labon pe phir koyee mast nagma ubhar aayaa hai

Phir se gaataa hai malhaar saaz-e-zeest mera
Phir se chayee hai takkh_ ul pe aarzuon ke ghata
Jhumti bal khaati hai barq umeedon ki
Phir se wafa ki zard aarizoN mein noor bhaa

Meri tanhaee bhi soyee hai aaj umroN ke baad
Main bhi khud se mila huin baad muddat ke
Dard ki aankhon mein bhi hein aaj massrrat ke aansoo
Tamanna ko milay phir se pairhan haqeeqat ke

Besood nahin mahabbat ki wus_ ataiN
Dil phir yeh mananay ko karta hai
Khird phir bebus si khari hai
phir jaagney ko karta hai

Aaj tu aayee hai to pathra gayee hai shikvon ki zubaaN
Kho gyay hain gilon ke bol kahin khalaaon mein
Meetha taanaa sa detaa hai beetee udaasee ka chehra
"Bhool gayaa hai "Sagar" usey vasl ki shuaon mein"

Abhi kuch pal mein toot jayega waqt-e-vasl ka dum
Phir se laut jayengey hum liye majboorion ke daaman
Tu meri ho ke bhi meri na hogi kabhi
Teri majboorian hain yeh duniya ke bemaar aqayud
Main bhi majboor huun in haalaat ke haathon humnufs meri
Aatee rhaa karo milnay jab talak mumkin hai
Kyuon na tab talaq ishq ko apnay
vajah miltee rahey jeeney ki
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Afsurda-Udaas, Takhleeq-Rachna,
saaz-e-zeest : instrument of life
takkh_ ul -Kalpana, barq- Lightening
aarizoN- Cheeks, pairhan- libaas
Besood-useless, wus_ ataiN-Vishaalta
Khird-Intellect, Junoon-passion,diwaangi
shuaon-rays, waqt-e-vas- Milan ka waqt
aqayud- usool aur riwaaz
humnufs- meri jaan(beloved),






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Old Oct 23rd, 2009, 07:24 PM   #51 (permalink)  
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Hijr-o-visaal



Fazaon ko phir vajeh si mil gayee mahakane ki
Afsurda badalon mein se chand phir muskuraya hai
Takhleeq meri mein phir aaney lagey hain shokhion ke dum
Labon pe phir koyee mast nagma ubhar aayaa hai

Phir se gaataa hai malhaar saaz-e-zeest mera
Phir se chayee hai takkh_ ul pe aarzuon ke ghata
Jhumti bal khaati hai barq umeedon ki
Phir se wafa ki zard aarizoN mein noor bhaa

Meri tanhaee bhi soyee hai aaj umroN ke baad
Main bhi khud se mila huin baad muddat ke
Dard ki aankhon mein bhi hein aaj massrrat ke aansoo
Tamanna ko milay phir se pairhan haqeeqat ke

Besood nahin mahabbat ki wus_ ataiN
Dil phir yeh mananay ko karta hai
Khird phir bebus si khari hai
phir jaagney ko karta hai

Aaj tu aayee hai to pathra gayee hai shikvon ki zubaaN
Kho gyay hain gilon ke bol kahin khalaaon mein
Meetha taanaa sa detaa hai beetee udaasee ka chehra
"Bhool gayaa hai "Sagar" usey vasl ki shuaon mein"

Abhi kuch pal mein toot jayega waqt-e-vasl ka dum
Phir se laut jayengey hum liye majboorion ke daaman
Tu meri ho ke bhi meri na hogi kabhi
Teri majboorian hain yeh duniya ke bemaar aqayud
Main bhi majboor huun in haalaat ke haathon humnufs meri
Aatee rhaa karo milnay jab talak mumkin hai
Kyuon na tab talaq ishq ko apnay
vajah miltee rahey jeeney ki
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Afsurda-Udaas, Takhleeq-Rachna,
saaz-e-zeest : instrument of life
takkh_ ul -Kalpana, barq- Lightening
aarizoN- Cheeks, pairhan- libaas
Besood-useless, wus_ ataiN-Vishaalta
Khird-Intellect, Junoon-passion,diwaangi
shuaon-rays, waqt-e-vas- Milan ka waqt
aqayud- usool aur riwaaz
humnufs- meri jaan(beloved),






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Old Nov 13th, 2009, 04:26 PM   #52 (permalink)  
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Aik Paaghal Nazm Paaghal SmaajoN Ke Naam

Raakh barseygi aasmaanoN se
Fiza meiN bhar jaigi qabaroN ki haddiaN
Apna hi lahu bahyga dariya dariya
NiklyaNgay naNgay-jism murdoN ke juloos

Kuttay roiNgay muNh aflaaq pe dhar kar
Aur raqs karaNygee siyaaroN ki hookeiN
AaNkh barsa karEygi naalioN ke keeRay
Shab peetee phiraygi sooraj ki kai

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Aflaaq- skies, Kai- Vomit






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Old Nov 18th, 2009, 12:29 AM   #53 (permalink)  
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" Ibn-e-Insha"


kal chaudhwin ki rat thi shab bhar raha charcha tera
kuch ne kaha ye chand hai kuch ne kaha chehra tera

ham bhi wahin maujud the ham se bhi sab pucha kiye
ham hans diye ham chup rahe manzur tha parda tera

is sheahr mein kis se milen ham se to chuti mahfilen
har shakhs tera nam le har shakhs diwana tera

kuche ko tere chor kar jogi hi ban jayen magar
jangal tere parbat tere basti teri sahra tera

ham aur rasm-e-bandagi ashuftagi uftadagi
ehsan hai kya kya tera ai husn-e-beparwa tera

do ashk jane kis liye palkon pe a kar tik gaye
altaf ki barish teri ikram ka darya tera

ai bedarg-o-beaman ham ne kabhi ki hai fugan
ham ko teri wahshat sahi ham ko sahi sauda tera

tu bewafa tu mahraban ham aur tujh se bad-guman
ham ne to pucha tha zara ye waqt kyun thehra tera

ham par ye sakhti ki nazar ham hain faqir-e-rahguzar
rasta kabhi roka tera daman kabhi thama tera

han han teri surat hasin lekin tu aisa bhi nahin
is shakhs k ashar se shohra hua kya kya tera

beshak usi ka dosh hai kahta nahin khamosh hai
tu ap kar aisi dawa bimar ho acha tera

bedard sunani ho to chal kahta hai kya achhi gazal
ashiq tera ruswa tera shayar tera "Insha" tera







" When you are in light, everything will follow you.
But when you enter dark, even your own shadow will not follow you. That is life."
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