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Old Jul 9th, 2008, 11:30 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Aaj Bhee

Woh Mayraa Naam Sun Kar

Sharmaa Jaati Hogee

Aur Apnay Haath Par

Mehendi Say Likhay Hovay

Mayray Naam k Pahlay Harf Ko

Pyaar Say Choomti Hogee

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Main Ussay Bhulaa Chuka Hoon

Kiyun Kay

Mainay Apnay Naam Kay Saaray Huroof

Kissi Aur Naam K Supurd Kar Di'ay Hain


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Old Jul 9th, 2008, 11:59 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Old Jul 9th, 2008, 12:00 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Old Jul 9th, 2008, 12:02 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Old Jul 9th, 2008, 05:34 PM   #5 (permalink)
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woh pyar say likhti hogi phri choomti hogi ... khush fehmi hai






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Old Jul 9th, 2008, 06:37 PM   #6 (permalink)
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"The death from which you flee will truly overtake you: then you will be sent back to the Knower of things secret and open: and He will tell you (the truth of) the things that you did!" (Surat al-Jumu'ah: 8).
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Old Jul 10th, 2008, 12:17 AM   #7 (permalink)
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inn logon ki baaton ka bura na manana.. in ko to bus leg pulling he aati hai..







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Old Jul 10th, 2008, 08:19 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Achi Hai different si waisay mein samjha ke naam likhnay ke baad aagay bewafa bhi likhti hogi chumnay ki bajaye but aap ne to case he ulta kardia






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Old Jul 10th, 2008, 11:33 AM   #9 (permalink)
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ye kia hy poety or prose??






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Old Jul 12th, 2008, 08:55 AM   #11 (permalink)
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woh pyar say likhti hogi phri choomti hogi ... khush fehmi hai
Shabo .... khushfami Par He Zindagi Main Aagay Barrhnay Ki Justujo Rehti Hay ...... Khushfehmi Na Ho To Zindagi Baykaar Hay

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PeeK u ok na?

agreed with shabbo
Yes I Am OK janab ...

Tum Mayray Saath Bhi Kabhi AGREE Ho Jao

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very nice

inn logon ki baaton ka bura na manana.. in ko to bus leg pulling he aati hai..
Thanx Bro

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Achi Hai different si waisay mein samjha ke naam likhnay ke baad aagay bewafa bhi likhti hogi chumnay ki bajaye but aap ne to case he ulta kardia
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ye kia hy poety or prose??
Yeh POETrY Hay






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Old Jul 12th, 2008, 08:56 AM   #12 (permalink)
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nehe meyn ne perhe he nehe gul perhe ge to baty geh kese he
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Old Jul 27th, 2008, 09:21 AM   #13 (permalink)
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Old Aug 1st, 2008, 09:09 AM   #14 (permalink)
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umda sharing






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kis,kis k meny naaz othaay tamaam raat
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Old Aug 1st, 2008, 03:55 PM   #16 (permalink)
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khan saib sutpatize janab, achee koshut kari tussee ney!
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Old Aug 4th, 2008, 07:25 PM   #17 (permalink)
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Thanx Dear ... Buhat Jald Aik dosri ghazal postnay Walaa Hoon ... :~)
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Old Aug 9th, 2008, 04:40 PM   #18 (permalink)
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Ik haqeeqat hee sahi,Firdous mein hooro'n ka wajood
Husn-e insa'n se nimatt loon to waha'n tak socho'n
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Old Aug 11th, 2008, 04:49 AM   #19 (permalink)
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Mainay Apnay Naam Kay Saaray Huroof
Kissi Aur Naam K Supurd Kar Di'ay Hain

Tumny apna naam change krlia kia PK tunn

btw zbrdast koshish hy, i like it... lekin tumhari bewafai achi nhi lagi... bewafa harjai






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Old Aug 18th, 2008, 06:14 PM   #20 (permalink)
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very nice
thanx fazeelat ~`)

nice to see u here :~)

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Mainay Apnay Naam Kay Saaray Huroof
Kissi Aur Naam K Supurd Kar Di'ay Hain

Tumny apna naam change krlia kia PK tunn

btw zbrdast koshish hy, i like it... lekin tumhari bewafai achi nhi lagi... bewafa harjai
Yeh Tou Main Mazaq Kar Raha Tha Naa Khaan


btw seriously thinking abt That

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Old Aug 20th, 2008, 01:35 AM   #21 (permalink)
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sabit hoa larkiyaan bewaqoof hoti hain or larkay bewafa






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Old Aug 20th, 2008, 06:24 AM   #22 (permalink)
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