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Jul 16th, 2008, 05:43 AM
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khiyal keye bendhen meye jo bendha tha
wohh ubb khood hee seye het sa chuka heye
ehsas keye tarazoo meye jo bahem tula tha
wohh ubb yoon hee gheth sa chuka heye
baa-wafaee ka peiker jo mujasim paya tha
wohh ubb achanek chup ho sa chela heye
hemdard dost o dil sa jo beye-punha lega tha
wohh rishteye meye ubb la-taluk bhena heye
kem na honeye ka kabhee tha jis ka yakeen
wohh sareye ka sara ubb nahi betcha heye
kadroon kee paheilaa ka jo metleb jana tha
wohh wohh ubb weisa nahi raha heye
Difference between God and humankind: God can say, 'be', and it becomes, but humankind has to act on what it says.
Last edited by Dushwari; Jul 16th, 2008 at 05:48 AM..
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Jul 16th, 2008, 09:22 AM
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ehsas keye tarazoo meye jo bahem tula tha
wohh ubb yoon hee gheth sa chuka heye
acha khayal hay; nice effort
thanks and regards 
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Jul 17th, 2008, 12:10 AM
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mucho, where are your poems?
did you write any recently?
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Jul 17th, 2008, 03:53 AM
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yaar apki wordings i dnt know y muje bilkul samaj nhi aati...words clear nhi hote...urdu ko eng men is tarha se likha karen k easily samaj aa jae......
"My Mind to Me a Kingdom Is"
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Jul 17th, 2008, 07:56 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Dushwari
mucho, where are your poems?
did you write any recently?
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me never posted here my tuk-bundee here, niether succeeded to gather words in any form of poetry, umm lets try if u say:
mun ki bunjar khaiytee se soach ka daman bhee veeraan hua
bikharay lafz, uljhee soachain, likhtay huay qalam bhee hairan hua
to be continued.... hehehehe
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Jul 18th, 2008, 11:02 PM
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multi-nicking is pretty obvious.
all the best,
Quote:
Originally Posted by abeeha
yaar apki wordings i dnt know y muje bilkul samaj nhi aati...words clear nhi hote...urdu ko eng men is tarha se likha karen k easily samaj aa jae......
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Jul 27th, 2008, 09:17 AM
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thanx for sharin
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Jul 27th, 2008, 11:43 PM
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you're welcome, rabiee.
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Aug 23rd, 2008, 07:11 PM
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nice but it is difficult to read....but really nice
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