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Old Jul 19th, 2008, 06:01 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I have started this thread to share your and mine poetry,

I am starting with my two Ash'aar:

These are basically on Pakistani Politics:


Phaily (spreaded) hai har soo mulk mein berozgari aur mehngai
Assemblian hain theatre Hakoomat hai Fankar aur Awaam Tamashai


Peetay palatay hain woh sabhi aik hee jaam mein
yeh awaami numainde jo nangay hain aik hee hamam mein






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agar ye aap ki zaati kawish hey tu 'shora e gupshup' mai post honi chahiyaa. yahan "intekhab'' mai sub apney pasundeeda shora ka muntakhib kalam paish kartay.






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Old Aug 6th, 2008, 07:21 AM   #4 (permalink)
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