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Jul 22nd, 2008, 03:41 PM
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ham aseeraan-e-ahl-e-ahdy wafaa,behissi kab talak rawaa rakhty..
duston sy khloos mil na sakaa,dushmanoon sy gilaa kiyaa karty..?
jinsy haasil hu sirf ranj-o-alam,dard-e-dil ki dawaa wo kiyaa karty
behissi kaa libaas oorahaa thhaa,dilka madd,aa kiyaa bayaan karty
koi ik phool tumsy khil na sakaa,khushk kalyaan hi kuchh ataa karty
khaali daaman koi jiye kesy? kuchh tu yaadon kaa zaad-e-raah karty
kitni shiddat sy tumko chaahaa thaa,itnaa ehsaas tu zaraa karty...
zindagi kuchh sehel hi hu jaati,aek wadaa ju tum wafaa kartay....
sheesha-e-dil thhaa choor choor huaa,sang baari na yon rawwa rakhty
kitni thi aas tum sy jaan-e-jahaan,mery zakhmon ki kuchh dawaa karty
aapko maan apni zaat py thhaa,kuchh hamen naaz apny aap py thha
yon wo nazuk si duor toot gaii,,jiski bunyaad par wafaa
kartayy..........!!!
(s.naz)
suoz-e-firaaq,yaas-o-alam,iztraab-o-shuoq kis,kis k meny naaz othaay tamaam raat
Last edited by S.786; Jul 23rd, 2008 at 03:21 AM.
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Jul 23rd, 2008, 06:07 AM
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#2 (permalink)
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jinsy haasil hu sirf ranj-o-alam,dard-e-dil ki dawaa wo kiyaa karty
behissi kaa libaas oorahaa thhaa,dilka madd,aa kiyaa bayaan karty(bayaan kiyaa kartay)
bahut khoob, aur akhri shair mai 'naz' khoob istemal keeta.
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Jul 23rd, 2008, 07:04 AM
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vry nice
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Jul 23rd, 2008, 08:18 AM
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hmmm 
Wafaa Ki Laaj Main Usko Mana Laytay Tou Achcha Tha
Anaa Ki Jung Main Aksar Judai Jeet Jaati hay..!!
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Jul 23rd, 2008, 12:25 PM
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nawaazish...janaab
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Jul 23rd, 2008, 03:23 PM
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bohat khoob 
yaaN kay sapaid-o-seh maiN hum ko, dakhal jo hai so itna hai
raat ko ro ro subhu kiya, ya din ko jooN tooN shaam kiya
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Jul 23rd, 2008, 04:23 PM
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mujhy real khushi huti hy...jab chcha aap raay dety hen.......v.v.thanks
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Jul 24th, 2008, 02:22 AM
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buhat khoob
behissi kaa libaas oorahaa thhaa,dilka madd,aa kiyaa bayaan karty(bayaan kiyaa kartay)
Imagination is more important than knowledge. For while knowledge defines all we currently know and understand, imagination points to all we might yet discover and create.
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Jul 24th, 2008, 04:13 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Ali_
buhat khoob
behissi kaa libaas oorahaa thhaa,dilka madd,aa kiyaa bayaan karty(bayaan kiyaa kartay) |
thanks 4 cmnts...
meny misry ko sawaaliya banany k liye is trah likhaa...
warna munasib aap k kehny k mutaabiq hy...thanks..again
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Jul 24th, 2008, 07:14 AM
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Bohot Khoob..
kafi achey andaaz se Giley bayan kiye hain..specially
"koi ik phool tumsy khil na sakaa,khushk kalyaan hi kuchh ataa karty"
its really impressive. !!!
Thanks for sharing !!!
[I Cannot always show it, but dont doubt my luv]
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Jul 24th, 2008, 02:44 PM
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v.v.thanks 4 liking...s...ji
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Jul 24th, 2008, 07:54 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by S.786
mujhy real khushi huti hy...jab chcha aap raay dety hen.......v.v.thanks
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zarra nawazi hai aap ki warna hum kaya hamari aouqaat kaya
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Jul 25th, 2008, 09:36 AM
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bohat achay agar ap ne waqie he khud se likhi lagta hia kahiN parhi hia pahlay ap kahin aur b post kartey/karti 
I Love walking In raiN because Nobody can see me Crying !!
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Jul 27th, 2008, 09:14 AM
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thanx for sharin
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Jul 28th, 2008, 11:31 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by KinaRa
bohat achay agar ap ne waqie he khud se likhi lagta hia kahiN parhi hia pahlay ap kahin aur b post kartey/karti |
dear kinara..
ye meri new ghazal hy....naqal karny waala 1 din zuroor pakra jata hy..
men ny kissi aur form pr bhi ye ghazal nhi post ki...thanks 4 liking...
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