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Old Jul 29th, 2008, 05:14 PM   #1 (permalink)
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not quite done, but felt like sharing something







yaaN kay sapaid-o-seh maiN hum ko, dakhal jo hai so itna hai
raat ko ro ro subhu kiya, ya din ko jooN tooN shaam kiya
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Old Jul 29th, 2008, 07:01 PM   #2 (permalink)
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not a bad effort but not just as good as could have been expected from someone who claims to be chacha Ghalib






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Old Jul 30th, 2008, 12:34 AM   #3 (permalink)
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waah buhut khoob....sharing hy






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Old Jul 30th, 2008, 02:13 AM   #4 (permalink)
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bohat achhay mazaameen baandhay haiN aap nay! paRh ker lutf aaya.... ! taqreeban ashaar achhay haiN bas ozaadn ki taSeeH kay liay agar kisi ustaad ko dikha lia kijay tau kalaam maiN nikhaar aa jaaye ga... !

bahar kaif daad haazir-e-khidmat hay....!

khush rahiaye...






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Old Jul 30th, 2008, 03:46 PM   #5 (permalink)
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wahh Bohat khoob chacha ji beautiful sharing






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wah waa kia kahnay, bahut khoob!
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Old Aug 5th, 2008, 04:09 PM   #7 (permalink)
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not a bad effort but not just as good as could have been expected from someone who claims to be chacha Ghalib
namon per na jaain... they're just a mirage
not bad is good enough... thankoo
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waah buhut khoob....sharing hy
thanks
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bohat achhay mazaameen baandhay haiN aap nay! paRh ker lutf aaya.... ! taqreeban ashaar achhay haiN bas ozaadn ki taSeeH kay liay agar kisi ustaad ko dikha lia kijay tau kalaam maiN nikhaar aa jaaye ga... !

bahar kaif daad haazir-e-khidmat hay....!

khush rahiaye...
daad kay liye bohat shukriya... lafz ozaadn ki samajh nahin aai
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wahh Bohat khoob chacha ji beautiful sharing
adaab arz hai
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wah waa kia kahnay, bahut khoob!
muncho mian shukriya
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