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Old Jul 30th, 2008, 02:22 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Ghazal

agarchay waqt kay tever kaRay thay
magar ham zindagi say kab laRay thay

faraar-e-zeest mumkin hi naheeN tha
shajar kay paaooN miTTi maiN gaRay thay

muhabbat bhi wohi, duniya wohi thee
wohi dariya, wohi kachay ghaRay thay

wo kab ka ja chuka tha zindagi say
magar ham baaNhaiN phelaaye khaRay thay

aur ab tau mom say bhi narm haiN ham
koii din thay kay ham zid per aRay thay

raha sar per salamat Gham ka suuraj
kam az kam apany saaye say baRay thay

sara-seema si kyuN thee saari basti
bhaNwar to door dariya maiN paRay thay

mila wo, keh raha tha, khush bohat hooN
magar aaNkhoN talay Halqay paRay thay

tau kya tum nay hamaiN dhokay maiN rakha
wafa bhi thee ya afsaanay ghaRay thay

KhizaaN pehlay pehel aaii thee us din
wo bichhRa tau bohat pattay jhaRay thay

wafa, mehr o murravvat aur ye duniya
hamaari aql per pat’thar paRay thay

shab-e-furqat sitaaray thay kay aaNsu
nageenay khil’at-e-shab maiN jaRay thay

hamaiN Ahmed saba nay phir na dekha
ke ham barg-e-KhizaaN aasaa paRay thay

Muhammad Ahmed
July 30, 2008







Raat yon dil main teri khoi hui yaad aai
Jesay veeranay main chupke se bahar aajaay
Jesay sehraaon main holay se chalay baad e naseem
Jesay dewanay ko be waja qarar aa jaay
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Old Jul 30th, 2008, 02:27 AM   #2 (permalink)
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buhut khoob.....thanks 4 sharing






suoz-e-firaaq,yaas-o-alam,iztraab-o-shuoq
kis,kis k meny naaz othaay tamaam raat
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Old Jul 30th, 2008, 02:48 AM   #3 (permalink)
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whole ghazal is really very beautiful.. each n every couplet is arranged for perfection..







Main Pal Do Pal Ka Shayer Hoon
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Old Jul 30th, 2008, 07:57 AM   #4 (permalink)
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aik aik shair buhat acha hai
In short whole of it is nice
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Old Jul 31st, 2008, 07:52 AM   #5 (permalink)
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S.786, Redidentity aur Rabiee,

bohat shukria aap sab ka, aap ki hosla afzaaii meray liay baaic-e-masarrat hay...

khush rahiye...!
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faraar-e-zeest mumkin hi naheeN tha
shajar kay paaooN miTTi maiN gaRay thay

muhabbat bhi wohi, duniya wohi thee
wohi dariya, wohi kachay ghaRay thay

wo kab ka ja chuka tha zindagi say
magar ham baaNhaiN phelaaye khaRay thay

waah waa bahuuut aalaa g
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Old Aug 5th, 2008, 09:46 PM   #7 (permalink)
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who bar bar apni batoon main prindoo ki misaal deta hai.........
saf saf kuin nai kahta k mera sahar choor ja.........
soory agr koi mistake hai is main
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Old Aug 8th, 2008, 07:55 AM   #8 (permalink)
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faraar-e-zeest mumkin hi naheeN tha
shajar kay paaooN miTTi maiN gaRay thay

muhabbat bhi wohi, duniya wohi thee
wohi dariya, wohi kachay ghaRay thay

wo kab ka ja chuka tha zindagi say
magar ham baaNhaiN phelaaye khaRay thay

waah waa bahuuut aalaa g
bohat shukria janaab!
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Old Aug 8th, 2008, 07:56 AM   #9 (permalink)
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who bar bar apni batoon main prindoo ki misaal deta hai.........
saf saf kuin nai kahta k mera sahar choor ja.........
soory agr koi mistake hai is main
baRi navaazish Ahsan Sahib....

bohat shukria....!
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