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Old Aug 2nd, 2008, 05:35 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Zulm-o-sittam ka Aftab

Nifs-ur-Nihar par

Dhaltai sai mai sisaktai wajood

Zakmau mai jaltai badan ka marham kaha sai laoo


Wahshat zada bagulo kai darmayan

Shauqa-i-rah paimai hai

Magar Tmanai-e-Aabla pai kaha sai laoo



Jis kee Yaqooti hontai ke tarash kai afsanai mashoor thai

Jis kee ghainari palko kee chaoo mai sham uttarti thee

Aur dahaktai ruksaar


Ussi hontau par phailtai Neelgoo sai

Hasratau kee zardi

zakhm zakhm dil,laho lahoo badan


Pakirana-i-iffat kai chaaru par tammancho kee mauhrai sabat hai

Aur halqa hai zanjeer liyai

Farzandanai-saltanat

Awara qahqahau mai ghiri baibaas wajood

Jis kai damaan kai ahtai paani si farishtai wazoo karai


Ya Khuda !


Koi Soora-i-Qiyaamat mil jai

Jis kee Sada-i-Raa'd sai

Bikhar jai sub dura hai ta'zeer


Is jigar paash lamhau kai darmayan

mai kitni bar toota !

mai kitni bar bikhra !


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Old Aug 2nd, 2008, 06:29 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Old Aug 2nd, 2008, 02:56 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Old Aug 3rd, 2008, 01:48 AM   #4 (permalink)
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very best....welcome,gps







suoz-e-firaaq,yaas-o-alam,iztraab-o-shuoq
kis,kis k meny naaz othaay tamaam raat
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Old Aug 4th, 2008, 03:50 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Tootti raat pai khunda sehar nagiha

Jhimilatai hai Shabistano kee khalwat kai charagh

or Ahmed Faraz ka aik shair arz hai

Itni Tareeqi ankho mai basi hai Faraz

Raat tau Raat hum din ko jalatai hai charagh


Koi bata dai Neelam kai uun Katauro ka bhaid

Jis kee atha ghairaiyo mai Samandar doob jatai hai






suna hai

In Palko ka Chilman jub wa hota hai

jaisai Shab-e-Amawas mai Chandni kee nahrai bikhar jati hai

Jaisai tareeqiyo ka daman shama froza ho jata hai

aur

Har soo hazarau deep jal uthtai hai

Jamo-Saboo kai is tufan mai

Luta diya Saqi nai Mai Khana is ada par



Suna hai yai Sharmagee nighahai jub haya sai jhukti hai


Jiaisai roshan ankho sai pai dar pai Subhai talooh ho rahi hau

Jheel kee in pinhaiyo mai

Subha-i-Awalee kee Shuai rangeen Tanai Banai buun rahi hau



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Old Aug 11th, 2008, 08:44 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Ik Atish-e-Shauq...Ik Raqs-e-Sharar...Nachtai Shaulo kai darmayan...Sargushashtagan-e-Zilaat-o-Ruswai...Ik Qatrai Ana'faal...Ya...Shabnami Hontau ka ik lams....Shauq-e-fazool hai ya Juraat-e-Rindana






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Old Aug 12th, 2008, 01:27 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Old Aug 12th, 2008, 05:18 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Old Aug 21st, 2008, 11:26 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Wohee Shahra-i-Baiwafa

Wohee Koocha-i-Janaa

Dil-e-Nakardakar mai jaltai Umeeda-i-Wafa kai deep

Jaisai Shamai-i-Shab-e-Akhir kee Lau daiti Roshni

Phir

Deeda-i-Tur aur Lahoo kee Boondh

Barsati Barish mai Sulagtai Haunt

Hathailee pai Barish kee yai Boondai

Tera Naam mairai Hathau kee Lakeerau par Sabat karti hai !






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Old Aug 21st, 2008, 11:56 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Deeda-i-Tur aur Lahoo kee Boondh

Barsati Barish mai Sulagtai Haunt

Hathailee pai Barish kee yai Boondai

Tera Naam mairai Hathau kee Lakeerau par Sabat karti hai !

mannay ustaad lajawab shaireee!!!!






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