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Aug 4th, 2008, 11:05 AM
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Yunhi andekha kar dena
agar ankhon men jugnu ho
agar barish men titli ho
basa k dil men rangon ko
unhe andekha kar dena!
Guzar kar phir dobara se
jo jhonka lot aae to
tumhe wapis bulae to
to be mayaa na ho jana
usay andekha kar dena!
sitare to hamesha se
falak per hi chamakte hen
agar chaho unhe panaa
to kali rat na ho jana
unhe andekha kar dena!
Muhabbat to hamesha se hi
sadiyon ki riwayat hai
jo hon mehsoos zanjeeren
to unko torr mat dena
unhe andekha kar dena!
hawaon k tasalsul men
ye har dam sath chalti hai
ise panaa agar chaho
to urr kar door mat jana
ise andekha kar dena !
The world's a bubble and the life of man Less than a span...!
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Aug 4th, 2008, 02:03 PM
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buhut khoob...abeeha
suoz-e-firaaq,yaas-o-alam,iztraab-o-shuoq kis,kis k meny naaz othaay tamaam raat
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Aug 5th, 2008, 05:08 AM
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Senior Member
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thanx S.786
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Aug 6th, 2008, 10:55 AM
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bohut nice hai
You can not change the past but you can ruin the present by worrying about the future.
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Aug 6th, 2008, 01:31 PM
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thnk u very much hiba
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Aug 6th, 2008, 01:36 PM
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Bond With The Best
Join Date: Nov 16, 2006 - 12:35 pm
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^ cuz I have to taste ur effort yet ...
"The person I like most is the one who points out my defects", Umar Radi Allahu Anhu
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Aug 7th, 2008, 07:33 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by zero~zero~seven
^ cuz I have to taste ur effort yet ...
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Aug 7th, 2008, 06:04 PM
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~ Khavab ki Surat ~
Join Date: May 21, 2002 - 1:00 am
Location: ghar pe
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kes ko kea kerne lege heyn sis 
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Aug 8th, 2008, 12:19 AM
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abeeha, the poem is really beautiful.. 
Main Pal Do Pal Ka Shayer Hoon Pal Do Pal Meri Kahani Hai..
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Aug 8th, 2008, 03:24 AM
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Beautiful.............
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Aug 8th, 2008, 04:46 AM
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thank u soooo much RI nd Fiza.....i just need ur encouragement.
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Aug 8th, 2008, 04:47 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by *Masoom Muskaan*
kes ko kea kerne lege heyn sis |
KIS KO? 
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Aug 8th, 2008, 08:08 AM
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Join Date: Oct 15, 2004 - 6:36 am
Location: Karachi
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bohat khoob! umda khayaalat nazm kiay haiN aap nay....
daad qabool kijay....!
Raat yon dil main teri khoi hui yaad aai
Jesay veeranay main chupke se bahar aajaay
Jesay sehraaon main holay se chalay baad e naseem
Jesay dewanay ko be waja qarar aa jaay
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Aug 8th, 2008, 09:01 AM
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kabool ki...nawazish apki
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Aug 10th, 2008, 12:58 PM
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~ Khavab ki Surat ~
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Quote:
Originally Posted by abeeha
KIS KO? |
andekah ker dena keh rehe tehn meyn wohe asking kesko andekah kerne ko keh rehe
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Aug 17th, 2008, 10:47 AM
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very well written
"The death from which you flee will truly overtake you: then you will be sent back to the Knower of things secret and open: and He will tell you (the truth of) the things that you did!" (Surat al-Jumu'ah: 8).
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Aug 17th, 2008, 12:47 PM
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Join Date: Aug 17, 2008 - 5:05 am
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[FONT=Verdana][SIZE=1]chandmei sat tera khusoorat cheera nasarata hai
glulab kei phool mei sey tere mehti khusboo aathi hai
sitaron say tere husati hoin batan yaad athi hain
aur aik aik paal mien teri dil mei yaad athi hai[/SIZE][/FONT]
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Aug 17th, 2008, 12:48 PM
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Join Date: Aug 17, 2008 - 5:05 am
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[FONT=Times New Roman,Times,Times NewRoman][SIZE=-1][SIZE=-1]Aapke Khayalon se fursat nahin milti
Hamein ek pal ki rahat nahin milti
Mil to jata hai bahut kuch
Bas aapki ek jhalak nahin milti
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Tujhe dekhe bina teri tasweer bana doon
Tujhe mile bina tera haal bata doon
Hai dum meri mohabbat mein itna
Teri aankh ka aansu apni aankh se baha doon
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Zindagi nahin humko Tujhse pyari
Tujh pe kurban hai Zindagi hamari
Aankhon mein ashq hain to kya
Jaan se pyari hai ek muskaan teri
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Din ke saath kabhi Raat nahi hoti
Chand ke saath kabhi Mulaqat nahi hoti
Jise chahte hain Hum jaan se Zyaada
Bas usi se hamari baat Nahi hoti
* Dil tod diya ab zahar bhi pile dena
Qafan na mile to Dupatta hi udha dena
Koi pooche ki Marz kya tha
Nazarein jhuka kar Mohabbat bata dena[/SIZE] [/SIZE][/FONT]
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Aug 24th, 2008, 08:50 AM
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Senior Member
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thank u soo much all of u ....
nice poetry paltalk....
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Aug 25th, 2008, 05:31 PM
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Junior Member
Join Date: Jul 29, 2008 - 11:27 am
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Nice one!!
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Aug 26th, 2008, 12:32 PM
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Senior Member
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thanx sid_ny...so nice of u.
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Sep 6th, 2008, 11:10 AM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jul 4, 2007 - 4:24 pm
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sitare to hamesha se
falak per hi chamakte hen
agar chaho unhe panaa
to kali rat na ho jana
unhe andekha kar dena!
Muhabbat to hamesha se hi
sadiyon ki riwayat hai
jo hon mehsoos zanjeeren
to unko torr mat dena
unhe andekha kar dena!
waaah bahut khoob o aalaa!
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