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Old Aug 4th, 2008, 02:14 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Bae iraadaa si ik muhubbat men

shehr-e-gham say hoi shanaasaai

phool kaliyon ki aarzoun men

mil gay khaar , aablaa paaii

dil ki nagree ki ruoshni tum thhy

mery jeewan ki har khushi tum thhhy

tum gay hu tuu,dil ki nagree men..

jesay ik shaam-e-hijr dar aai

jiski chaahat say dil ki nagree men

aas ki shamma jhilmilaai thii

kiyaa khabar thi ossi lu hamko

phir yuonhi omr bhar jalaay gii

kesay tay hugi tery bin hamdam

hijr ki raah , dasht-e-sehraaii

ik omar ko guzaarny k liye...

kitny jeewan hun sarf-e-tanhaai ?

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suoz-e-firaaq,yaas-o-alam,iztraab-o-shuoq
kis,kis k meny naaz othaay tamaam raat
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Old Aug 8th, 2008, 08:04 AM   #2 (permalink)
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masha Allah

achhi nazm hay...

daad qabool kijay..

title maiN "ik" ki jaga aap nay "ki" likh dia hay is ki taseeH ker lijay ga.........






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Old Aug 8th, 2008, 10:49 AM   #3 (permalink)
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buhut nawaazish...janaab
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Old Aug 8th, 2008, 03:58 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Wah
Kya Baat hAi Janaab
Din Ba Din Rawanii or Nikhaar Mein Izzafa hOta Ja Raha hAi

bOht KhOoob






Mera Tareeq
Ameerii nahieN
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Old Aug 9th, 2008, 12:53 AM   #5 (permalink)
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ye aapkaa husn-e-nazar hy....thanks
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Old Aug 9th, 2008, 12:58 AM   #6 (permalink)
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very beautiful..






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Pal Do Pal Meri Kahani Hai..
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Old Aug 9th, 2008, 01:21 PM   #7 (permalink)
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