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Aug 9th, 2008, 01:04 AM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Apr 13, 2007 - 5:38 am
Location: Karachi
Posts: 8,375
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Aik Nazm,
Teray Honton Pe Itni Khamoshi
Aur Aankhon Main Ek Sada Si Lagti Hai
Kion Tuu Hans Bol Ke Nahi Milti
Kion Tuu Mujh Se Khafa Si Lagti Hai
Teri Aankhain Sada Ki Qaatil Hain
Inn Main Her Damm Qaza Si Lagti Hai
Teray Aanchal Ke Saa-ay Main Bethoon
Iss Ki Khushboo, Hina Si Lagti Hai
Teray Aanay Se Phool Khiltay Hain
Kitni Dilkash Fiza Si Lagti Hai
Teri Guftaar Main Hai Sheereeni
Aur Lehjay Main Ek Adaa Si Lagti Hai
(Ahmer)
Umeed Hai Aap Logon Ko Pasand Aye Gi..
Regards,
Main Pal Do Pal Ka Shayer Hoon Pal Do Pal Meri Kahani Hai..
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Aug 9th, 2008, 02:53 AM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Sep 17, 2006 - 2:32 am
Location: dasht-e-tanhai
Posts: 2,597
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wow Ahmer...how come i cant write like this? 
~wo lutt jaye jo humse dil ko lagaye~
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Aug 9th, 2008, 02:57 AM
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Moderator
Join Date: Jan 15, 2002 - 1:00 am
Location: Middle of Nowhere
Posts: 8,556
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wah ji very nice  keep it up 
Jia dharak dharak... Jia dharak dharak jaye
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Aug 11th, 2008, 12:14 AM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Apr 13, 2007 - 5:38 am
Location: Karachi
Posts: 8,375
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thanks alot JJW jee n Shab 
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Aug 11th, 2008, 04:55 AM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jul 24, 2005 - 10:03 am
Location: Dubai
Posts: 2,878
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One more bohat Aala, mujhy bhi likna sikhao kesy itni achi liktay hain 
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Aug 11th, 2008, 05:03 AM
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~ Khavab ki Surat ~
Join Date: May 21, 2002 - 1:00 am
Location: ghar pe
Posts: 8,472
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Jhanjharewali
wow Ahmer...how come i cant write like this? |
os ke lea koch akel chahea hote he 
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Aug 12th, 2008, 01:29 AM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Mar 22, 2008 - 10:47 am
Location: at home
Posts: 1,153
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buhut khoob
suoz-e-firaaq,yaas-o-alam,iztraab-o-shuoq kis,kis k meny naaz othaay tamaam raat
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Aug 16th, 2008, 02:00 AM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Apr 13, 2007 - 5:38 am
Location: Karachi
Posts: 8,375
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thanks nakhan n s.786 
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Aug 16th, 2008, 02:00 AM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Apr 13, 2007 - 5:38 am
Location: Karachi
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Quote:
Originally Posted by nakhan
One more bohat Aala, mujhy bhi likna sikhao kesy itni achi liktay hain |
kabhi ishq karain aur phir dekhain 
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