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Old Aug 12th, 2008, 01:41 PM   #1 (permalink)
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ajab si khush gumaani thhi

tumhen ham bhool bethhy hen

zaraa barsi ju ye baarish....,

tu phir kuchh yaad saa aayaa

mera wo roothnaa tu sang

teraa barh kr manaa lenaa

men ju inkaar karti thee

tumhen men chaah nhin sakti

mujhy tum bhool bhi jaao

tumhaara naaz sy kehnaa

,,tumhen apnaa banaanaa hy,,

men kehti ye nhin aasaan...

mery dilko fatah karnaa...

shikasta hu k tum haary

chaly phir chhur kr mujhko

lagaa , kuchh gum huaa jesy

adhoori men hoi jesay

lagy be rang ye nazzaary

magar ye aaj ki baarish..!

mujhy bekal si karti hay

tumhaari yaad aati hay

men khud say haar bethi hoon

suno men aaj kehti hoon

men oss waqt bhi tumhaari thii

men iss pal bhi tumhaari hoon

kahaan say waqt wo laaon

men kesy tumko batlaaon

men tumko yaad karti hoon

binaa tery adhoori hoon...!


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suoz-e-firaaq,yaas-o-alam,iztraab-o-shuoq
kis,kis k meny naaz othaay tamaam raat
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Old Aug 14th, 2008, 12:19 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Old Aug 14th, 2008, 02:14 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Old Aug 16th, 2008, 05:18 PM   #5 (permalink)
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''hamesha dair kar deta hoon, kisee ko kuch batana ho, baat kuch aur thee ye samjhana ho, hamesha dair kar deta hoon''
nice effort as always
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"The death from which you flee will truly overtake you: then you will be sent back to the Knower of things secret and open: and He will tell you (the truth of) the things that you did!" (Surat al-Jumu'ah: 8).
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Ye yaad tha ke duwa karooN par utthey rahey merey haath yuN
jesey khaahishoN ke hajoom meiN kaheeN kho gai teri aarzu
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Buhat Achchay .... Muhabbat K Ajeeb ahsasaat jo kabhi peecha anheen chorrtay :~(






Wafaa Ki Laaj Main Usko Mana Laytay Tou Achcha Tha
Anaa Ki Jung Main Aksar Judai Jeet Jaati hay..!!
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Old Aug 26th, 2008, 12:37 AM   #12 (permalink)
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w0w.. its beautiful.. very effectively written..

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Main Pal Do Pal Ka Shayer Hoon
Pal Do Pal Meri Kahani Hai..
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zarr-e-nawazish ahmar....buhut jald rply karna yaad aayaa
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wah... bohat khoob






yaaN kay sapaid-o-seh maiN hum ko, dakhal jo hai so itna hai
raat ko ro ro subhu kiya, ya din ko jooN tooN shaam kiya
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sooo nice....
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