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Old Aug 12th, 2008, 06:09 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Pyare dosto,

yahan aa kar shamil ho jay-yeh aap sab log.
shru ho jaye shayer-o-shairy,,,

rules (or better said rights;):
first person posts a sentence and then the second has to rhyme and then the 3rd puts a sentence down then 4th rhymes with that and so on,,,let us see what we can come up with,,,together,,,as GS dosto;)
==> oh yeah before i forget,,,emoticon bhi stick kar sakte ho after ur sentence to give a bit more feeling;)
and please be serious in what you post ok?
acha hoga,,,trust me ;)

aapki dost FAsanti

i'll start:

"Teri nazr hamari nazr say jab milli",,,







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Old Aug 13th, 2008, 02:40 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Pal Do Pal Meri Kahani Hai..
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meyn ne anda nehe kaha andha kaha tah means jeske bad nezer nehe aea






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oho i know.. magar mainay anda kaha






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Old Aug 13th, 2008, 05:57 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Old Aug 13th, 2008, 06:03 AM   #7 (permalink)
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ganday andon ko ubaal ke mat khao






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iss se acha gai station pe jakay baich do







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Old Aug 13th, 2008, 09:24 AM   #10 (permalink)
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? ap logon ko anday bohat pasand hain kya?

jab maine anda ubalaa,,,
jab maine anda ubalaa,,,
jab maine,,,
anda,,,
ubala,,,
to,,,
anda,,,
ubal gaya,,,
wah wah wah,,, thankyou thankyou thankyou.

lugta hai mazaq hi bana deeya iss topic ka :/ dekho mai bhi andon waki baat karne laggi.

ok so anyone?,,,






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i said andha red bhae ne anda bana dea mere fault nehe he






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lolx.. i love anday.. main nashtay main raat k khanay main anda he khata hoon aksar..

kabhi kabhi to teacher bhi mujhe anda de detay hain iss khayal se k ahmer ko anday pasand hain






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