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Aug 18th, 2008, 06:37 PM
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Dil Main Ab Tak Hain Paywast Aankhai'n Tumharee
Meray Hosloo'n Ki Hain Shikast Aankhai'n Tumharee
Mujhay Dar hay Kaheen Dunya Tujhay Badnaam Na Karday
Hain Tayree Shokiyoo'n Ki Sarparast Aankhai'n Tumharee
Shab e Firaq Ki Tanhaa'ee Mujhay Maar Hee Daytee
Hay Mayree Saansoo'n Ka Bandobast Aankhai'n Tumharee
Haath Utt'tay Hee Laboo'n Par Ek Hee Dua Aati Hay
Khudaa Karay Naa Kabhi Past Aankhai'n Tumharee
Dunya K Saaray Ghum Mayree Aankhoo'n Main Hain Panhaa'n
Hay Khushyoo'n Ki Ek Fahrist Aankhai'n Tumharee
Judai Shamil Hay Azal Say Fitrat e Ishq main JavaiD
Naa Ho Shaayad Hijar Parast Aankhai'n Tumharee
~~ Precious^Khan ~~
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Wafaa Ki Laaj Main Usko Mana Laytay Tou Achcha Tha
Anaa Ki Jung Main Aksar Judai Jeet Jaati hay..!!
Last edited by Precious^Khan; Aug 18th, 2008 at 06:45 PM.
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Aug 19th, 2008, 02:38 PM
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buhut khoob
suoz-e-firaaq,yaas-o-alam,iztraab-o-shuoq kis,kis k meny naaz othaay tamaam raat
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Aug 20th, 2008, 06:26 AM
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Thanx S.786 :~)
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Aug 22nd, 2008, 12:13 AM
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woww ap bhi poet hain ... very nice ... keep it up 
Jia dharak dharak... Jia dharak dharak jaye
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Aug 26th, 2008, 01:20 AM
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 very nice..
Main Pal Do Pal Ka Shayer Hoon Pal Do Pal Meri Kahani Hai..
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Aug 26th, 2008, 04:02 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Shab-e-Hijar
woww ap bhi poet hain ... very nice ... keep it up |
Thanx Shabbzzz :~)
Ji Kabhi Kabhi Dauraa Parrta Hay 
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Originally Posted by redidentity
very nice.. |
Thanx REDI :~)
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Aug 27th, 2008, 01:01 PM
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 @ dora parna ... mujhay kyu nahi parta asa dora 
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Aug 29th, 2008, 11:15 PM
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koN dil'aaN dee'yaN janaY
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bohat khubsurat nakhiN wo b Pee^k 
~BadlooN peR baseRa~
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( ._.).(._. ) o(_(')(')..(')(')_)o
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Aug 30th, 2008, 08:05 AM
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great effort Pk...amazing ...very nice poem
The world's a bubble and the life of man Less than a span...!
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Sep 2nd, 2008, 08:20 AM
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loshayyyyyyyy, woww kia shairee ki hay PK paa g!
ye javaid kon haiga?
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Sep 3rd, 2008, 03:58 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Precious^Khan
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Shab e Firaq Ki Tanhaa'ee Mujhay Maar Hee Daytee
Hay Mayree Saansoo'n Ka Bandobast Aankhai'n Tumharee
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yaani Oxygen marks ki zaroorat nahi :-p
anyhow i like this one , baat meiN gehraai hey, thanks for sharing :-)
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Hum ney kaantoN ko bhi narmii sey chuhwaa hey aksar
log be-dard heiN PhooloN ko massal detay heiN
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Oct 3rd, 2008, 06:23 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Shab-e-Hijar
@ dora parna ... mujhay kyu nahi parta asa dora |
Yeh Sirf Aashiq Mizaaj Logoo'n Ko Parrta Hay ;-)
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Originally Posted by Koyal
bohat khubsurat nakhiN wo b Pee^k |
Pahlay Daykho...Phir Likho...Phir Posto 
Mayree Aankhian Tou Bin Pi'ay Hee 
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Originally Posted by muncho
loshayyyyyyyy, woww kia shairee ki hay PK paa g!
ye javaid kon haiga?
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Thanx Muncho Pra Ji ... Ji Myara Naam Hay Javaid Khan Yousufzai Aka P^K ;)
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Originally Posted by GuL-e-Tasbeeh
yaani Oxygen marks ki zaroorat nahi :-p
anyhow i like this one , baat meiN gehraai hey, thanks for sharing :-)
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Thanx Gul 4 ur Precious Commennts :~)
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Oct 3rd, 2008, 06:24 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by abeeha
great effort Pk...amazing ...very nice poem
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Thnx Abeeha Ji :~)
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