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Old Jun 27th, 2009, 02:50 AM   #1 (permalink)  
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Aik Nazm,

Khizaan Ka Mausam Guzar Raha Hai
Hawa Bhi Nohay Suna Rahi Hai
Ye Sookhay Pattay Bikhar Rahay Hain
Tumhari Yaadain Bhi Aa Rahee Hain

Jo Dil Ko Meray Sata Rahee Hain..

(Ahmer)






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Old Jun 29th, 2009, 09:54 AM   #2 (permalink)  
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wah wah kya kamal ki nazm hai






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Old Jun 29th, 2009, 09:57 AM   #3 (permalink)  
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Old Jun 29th, 2009, 12:59 PM   #4 (permalink)  
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Old Jun 29th, 2009, 01:04 PM   #5 (permalink)  
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!!!!!!!TAkdeer SY ZAIDA AUR NaSeEb SE kam,,KABHI KISI KO zAiDa YaN KaM NAI MILTA!!!!!!!!
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Old Jul 10th, 2009, 02:34 PM   #7 (permalink)  
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A heart asks for no shrine, nor heavens divine
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Old Jul 27th, 2009, 01:46 PM   #9 (permalink)  
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Bahot khub, bahot khub!
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Aik Nazm,

Khizaan Ka Mausam Guzar Raha Hai
Hawa Bhi Nohay Suna Rahi Hai
Ye Sookhay Pattay Bikhar Rahay Hain
Tumhari Yaadain Bhi Aa Rahee Hain

Jo Dil Ko Meray Sata Rahee Hain..

(Ahmer)

Simply awesome ....... Khizaan kay mousum key buhat khoubsurat aakasi ..... keep it up Ahmar






Uss kay Dushman Hain Buhat Aadami Acha Hoga
Woh Bhi Meri He Tarah Shahar Mein Tanga Hoga
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Old Aug 11th, 2009, 03:28 PM   #13 (permalink)  
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musical and well expressed.






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I will swim with the mermaids forever thereafter....
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Old Aug 16th, 2009, 02:02 PM   #14 (permalink)  
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Wonderful. you can do a lot. keep it up
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Old Aug 19th, 2009, 01:31 AM   #15 (permalink)  
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Old Aug 20th, 2009, 11:47 AM   #16 (permalink)  
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Old Aug 26th, 2009, 06:21 PM   #17 (permalink)  
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nice but luks incomplete
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Old Aug 28th, 2009, 11:35 PM   #18 (permalink)  
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Old Aug 29th, 2009, 02:40 AM   #20 (permalink)  
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v nice work ahmer, boht sensative hai.






Live 4 others.....chuchu
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