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Old Aug 19th, 2009, 07:55 AM   #41 (permalink)  
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Sannan Sannan hawa chalay, urha le gaiee Sannan ko
Redi ne usski bhains churra lee, ab Sannan tarsay makhan ko...

Bhains ke baad sannan ne khareedi bakree
Niki Di ki recipe daikh kar bhagi woh, ab sannan roey mutton ko ..

ab ki baar sannan miyaan lay aaya aik murghi..
shabbo ne aa aa kar ke murghi phansa lee jaal mein, ab sannan burra kahay uss guppan ko...

:hmm: aur kia??







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Old Aug 20th, 2009, 04:42 AM   #42 (permalink)  
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FT Allah Ka Wasta Ramz Aur Qafiye Ka Tou Khyal Rakh Laiti Anyway Koshish Achi hay Kum Uz Kum Sannan Sannan Ko Sana San Sana San Hawa Chalay Kar Do







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Old Aug 21st, 2009, 01:59 AM   #43 (permalink)  
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Fairy Tail Kay Liye ........


Woh Din Bhi Kia Din Hotay Thay,
Jub Fairy Khoti Par Baitha Karti Thi
Aur Daikhnay Walay Kahtay Thay
Woh Fairy Tail Par Khoti Baithi Hay







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Old Aug 21st, 2009, 02:43 AM   #44 (permalink)  
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maiN naya huN yahaN isii liye kisi ko jaantaa nahiiN. meraa apnaa hii ek mazaaHiya she'r pesh-e-Khidmat hai gar qubool uftaad:

tum apne Hisse kii thoRii sii biryaanii mujhe de do
haDDiyaaN le lo tum, boTii, dilbar_jaanii!, mujhe de do


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Old Aug 25th, 2009, 06:53 AM   #45 (permalink)  
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Fairy Tail Kay Liye ........


Woh Din Bhi Kia Din Hotay Thay,
Jub Fairy Khoti Par Baitha Karti Thi
Aur Daikhnay Walay Kahtay Thay
Woh Fairy Tail Par Khoti Baithi Hay


Hhahahaa.....LOLllllll.







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Old Aug 25th, 2009, 10:41 AM   #46 (permalink)  
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i think u r away frm topic, can u tell me wht is the ending letter?







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Old Aug 26th, 2009, 01:36 AM   #47 (permalink)  
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Sannan that one was really be-tukka, not funny and be-maainay (meaningless) shair. next time dont dare to say such shair in this thread






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Old Aug 27th, 2009, 06:58 AM   #48 (permalink)  
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this is not my shair...

Yeh Laghzish ahtraman ho gaiee thi
Jawani ko burhapa keh diya tha
Woh BiBi aaj taq hum se khaffa hai
Jissay bhoolay se AAPA keh diya tha...



Your turn now .....






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Old Aug 28th, 2009, 04:29 AM   #49 (permalink)  
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Hhahahaa.....LOLllllll.

Thank you thank you ...... yaar yah FT ko bhi samjha daina ussay samjh naheen aai hay






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Old Aug 29th, 2009, 06:38 AM   #50 (permalink)  
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FT ko samjh nahin aaey ga kiyun ke woh FT ke standard ka shair nahin hai






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