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Aug 21st, 2009, 05:25 AM
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Kuch khwab adhoore hote hain
Kuch adhe kuch poore hote hain
Yahan lafzon ki bohtat hai
Danista kuch jumle adhoore hote hain
Jaise,kuch batain uljhi uljhi si
Kuch apne tain suljhi si
Koi makri ka ghana sa jala bhi
Koi sim sim ya muheeb sa tala bhi
Ye laakh rhain so talon main
Maazi ki garam hawaon main
Jhrokon se jure hote hain
Kuch khwab adhoore hote hain
Dil kis ko kahe chup kar ja
Jab kahin bhi koi awaz nhin
Aankhain bhi banjar rooh jaisi
Ab shikron si parwaz nhin
Khushk aankhain or rona bhi khamosh sa
Ik sach,kuch yaad kuch faramosh sa
Per kuch jhoot sach se bhi pyare hote hain
Jaise!
Kuch khwab adhoore hote hain
Main khud farebi main mubtla hoon
Mujhe waqt ka koi hosh nhin
Ye din hai ya hai raat dhali
Or gharian bhi khamosh nhin
Kuch apni kaho,kuch meri suno
Kuch lamhon se must-ar bhi lo
Gar chup he sadhe rehna hai
To lafzon ko baigaar main do
Laakh likho chahe lahoo se
Kuch kaghaz phir bhi kore hote hain
Haan!
Kuch khwab adhure hote hain
Kuch khwab adhure hte hain!!!
Live 4 others.....chuchu
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Aug 21st, 2009, 07:55 AM
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#2 (permalink)
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Join Date: Nov 1, 2006 - 4:52 am
Posts: 345
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Shazia is it your own creation ?????? This is beautiful .....
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Aug 21st, 2009, 09:57 AM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jun 14, 2009 - 1:13 am
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yeah it is my own, thanx.
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Aug 23rd, 2009, 03:38 PM
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Join Date: Mar 23, 2000 - 1:00 am
Location: In me Zone!
Posts: 2,400
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Laakh likho chahe lahoo se
Kuch kaghaz phir bhi kore hote hain
Haan!
Kuch khwab adhure hote hain
Kuch khwab adhure hte hain!!!
Aik bohot umdah kawish Shazia. Very well done. Cheers :roze:
Life's a Mystery Yet to resolve, Joy's some where yet to discover
Mind's a universe yet to explore, Love's a sweet pain, for now and forever.
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Aug 23rd, 2009, 03:48 PM
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SaNa ds *MaGiC oF BeAuTy*
Join Date: May 11, 2009 - 6:25 am
Location: dubai
Posts: 3,998
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!!!!!!!TAkdeer SY ZAIDA AUR NaSeEb SE kam,,KABHI KISI KO zAiDa YaN KaM NAI MILTA!!!!!!!!
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Aug 24th, 2009, 11:37 AM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jun 14, 2009 - 1:13 am
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thanku gypsi,coid fire and sana.
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Aug 26th, 2009, 06:19 PM
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Junior Member
Join Date: Feb 17, 2008 - 12:31 pm
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Quote:
Laakh likho chahe lahoo se
Kuch kaghaz phir bhi kore hote hain
Haan!
Kuch khwab adhure hote hain
Kuch khwab adhure hte hain
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very very nice
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Aug 27th, 2009, 01:57 AM
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#8 (permalink)
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jun 14, 2009 - 1:13 am
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thanx gemeni.
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