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dard dil se judaa nahiiN hotaa...merii ek chhoTii bahr kii Ghazal dard dil se judaa nahiiN hotaa...merii ek chhoTii bahr kii Ghazal


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Old Aug 21st, 2009, 05:52 PM   #1 (permalink)  
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salaam/aadaab/tasleemaat

maiN aaj pahli baar aapkii is Haseen maHfil-e-she'r o suKhan meN apnii ek adnaa sii kaavish pesh karne kii jasaarat kar rahaa huuN is ummeed e qawii ke saath k aapkii tab'a e naazuk par baar e giraaN na guzregii. aapkii tanqees o tanqeed aur Hausalah-afzaaii kaa shiddat se intizaar rahegaa.

shukria

faqat Khaak_nasheeN,
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1.
dard dil se judaa nahiiN hotaa
koii yuN baa_vafaa nahiiN hotaa

2.
baat koii to hai kudoorat kii
ranj be_muddu'aa nahiiN hotaa

3.
yuN mile ho Ghuroor o naKhwat se
jaise dil meN Khudaa nahiiN hotaa

4.
tumbhii naaseH kahiiN lagaao dil
rog jii kaa buraa nahiiN hotaa

5.
mashwara dil kaa maan lete haiN
phir bhii dil kaa kahaa nahiiN hotaa

6.
pyaar "Sahbaa" se hai k zauq e nazar
aaj tak faisla nahiiN hotaa

muntazir e aaraa






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Old Aug 22nd, 2009, 12:20 AM   #2 (permalink)  
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sher no 3 is fantastic, gud work.






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Old Aug 23rd, 2009, 07:58 AM   #3 (permalink)  
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thank you so much Shazia. i liked that one too.






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Old Aug 23rd, 2009, 03:34 PM   #4 (permalink)  
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Nice work mate. Keep it up. Cares






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very nice , buhut omda rwani hay jnab

lekin last sher mn kiya ,, Sahbaa ,, aapka takhllus hay???
kion k mujhy thuraa prhny mn alag sa laga ..
keep it up jnab






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keep it up
i like the 3rd sher
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Old Aug 26th, 2009, 06:30 PM   #7 (permalink)  
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Old Aug 27th, 2009, 12:16 AM   #8 (permalink)  
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I liked the 5th shair... nice work!






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Nice work mate. Keep it up. Cares
shukria sad hazaar gulistaan






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Old Sep 6th, 2009, 08:58 PM   #11 (permalink)  
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very nice , buhut omda rwani hay jnab

lekin last sher mn kiya ,, Sahbaa ,, aapka takhllus hay???
kion k mujhy thuraa prhny mn alag sa laga ..
keep it up jnab

pasandeedgii ke liye beHad mamnoon o mutashakkir huN

ji, "Sahbaa" meraa taKhallus hai. ab aise taKhallus kam kam hii sho'araa musta'mil karte haiN. thank you






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Old Sep 6th, 2009, 08:59 PM   #12 (permalink)  
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keep it up
i like the 3rd sher
shukria. mujeh bhi teesaa pasand aayaa nisbatan. thank you






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i liked that
lonely ji shukria. thanks for liking ma Ghazal.






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I liked the 5th shair... nice work!

Fara Ji aapkii Hausalah-afzaaii sar aaNkhoN par. she'r 5 pasand karne ke liye mamnoon u shukr_guzaar huN






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Old Sep 8th, 2009, 12:36 AM   #16 (permalink)  
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simply cool ..... Ghazal Goui mujhay hamaisha say aik mushkil fan lagata hay leekan aap nay kamal kar dia .... buhat buhat mubarkbaad wasool kigiye ga .....
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Ranj be_muddu'aa nahi hota


Bohat kohab !
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khoob hai






yaaN kay sapaid-o-seh maiN hum ko, dakhal jo hai so itna hai
raat ko ro ro subhu kiya, ya din ko jooN tooN shaam kiya
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zabardust poetry g .....






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Woh Bhi Meri He Tarah Shahar Mein Tanga Hoga
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