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Old Aug 24th, 2009, 03:35 AM   #1 (permalink)  
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Kiun tann pe dhooni rmaa k wo
Ik jogi bana deewana hua
Wo chaal baiganon wali thi
Phir kis nehaj ka parwana hua
Mai shayad pagal sodai
Jo her jag be-thikana hua
Kia main bhi saadhoo jogi hoon
Na janoon kis ka rogi hoon
Maot bhi ai to kaise ai
Keh mujhko jeene ka bahana na mila
Ye kia khumari hai charon taraf
Keh koi zi-rooh be-hosh nhin
Sab jante hain farana hain
Per zahiri tan-o-tosh nhin
Gar koi waqt ka ameer nhin
To kis karoon ka khazana hua
Na jane wo to pagal hai
Ye rasta hai k manzil hai
Phir!
Kiun tann pe dhooni rma k wo
Ik jogi bana deewana hua...






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Old Aug 24th, 2009, 04:19 AM   #2 (permalink)  
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Shazia you seems to be a professional person






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Old Aug 24th, 2009, 05:56 AM   #3 (permalink)  
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a cool stuff
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Old Aug 24th, 2009, 11:35 AM   #4 (permalink)  
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thanku sannan & gypsi, i had been english poetess bt my sis encouraged me 2 write in urdu & with the love and apreciation of you ppl i became more gud.
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Old Aug 30th, 2009, 07:52 PM   #5 (permalink)  
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Urdu jaisi mithaas aur dard kisi aur zubaan mein kahaan, Shaiza aap urdu mein bhi likha kijiye..
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Old Aug 31st, 2009, 03:08 AM   #6 (permalink)  
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sorry to ask but What does it mean in english?

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thanku aryaan & morgan, english means i hve written a buk of english poetry by the name of REVERY. soon i'll post a poem frm it.
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Old Sep 1st, 2009, 05:17 AM   #8 (permalink)  
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thanku sannan & gypsi, i had been english poetess bt my sis encouraged me 2 write in urdu & with the love and apreciation of you ppl i became more gud.
Thats great, you can share your English poetry as well ...






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Old Sep 1st, 2009, 03:10 PM   #9 (permalink)  
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inshallah i will.
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Old Sep 2nd, 2009, 02:01 AM   #10 (permalink)  
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Shazia, we look forward on your poetry english version....


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Old Sep 2nd, 2009, 10:18 AM   #12 (permalink)  
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yeh urdu hai jise english main likha gya hai.
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Old Sep 2nd, 2009, 04:13 PM   #13 (permalink)  
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salam Shazia,

i raed ur nazam. achhi koshish hai. mere Khayaal se kalaam meN "sinf" [gender] ayaaN nahiiN honaa chaahiye is liye kam se kam miaN to parhez kartaa huN. maiN kaa lafz jahaaN aayegaa urdu meN usse verb ke zariye gender ka pataa chal jaayegaa jaise kahna k:

maiN nahiiN maantii yaa maiN nahiiN maantaa

isse se gender saaf numaayaaN hai. agar is maiN ko "ham se" badal diyaa jaaye to universality bhi aa jaayegii statement meN aur gender bhi uncognizable hogaa yani yuN kahna k:

ham nahiiN maante

aap agar urdu vocab apnii baRhaayeN to shaairi meN nikhaar aa jaayegaa. u used a good word...nehaj good
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thank u hashmat, next time i'll b careful.
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salam Shazia,

i raed ur nazam. achhi koshish hai. mere Khayaal se kalaam meN "sinf" [gender] ayaaN nahiiN honaa chaahiye is liye kam se kam miaN to parhez kartaa huN. maiN kaa lafz jahaaN aayegaa urdu meN usse verb ke zariye gender ka pataa chal jaayegaa jaise kahna k:

maiN nahiiN maantii yaa maiN nahiiN maantaa

isse se gender saaf numaayaaN hai. agar is maiN ko "ham se" badal diyaa jaaye to universality bhi aa jaayegii statement meN aur gender bhi uncognizable hogaa yani yuN kahna k:

ham nahiiN maante

aap agar urdu vocab apnii baRhaayeN to shaairi meN nikhaar aa jaayegaa. u used a good word...nehaj good




I think u r a teacher good i like it
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