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Sep 2nd, 2009, 03:19 AM
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Join Date: Jun 14, 2009 - 1:13 am
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I am far from my children
They call me back
But i can't return
Many summers
Winters & automns
Springs & flowers blossomed
They all passed
without my dear ones
My son become bold
My daughters are young
My wife grew old
Whenever i go
To meet my tots
They cherish my love
I cherish their thoughts
Then they ask me that
Make it possible dad
We can live with you
Together we will stay
& with us you live too...
Live 4 others.....chuchu
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Sep 2nd, 2009, 03:23 AM
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my father is in kuwait, so i really miss him although he come every year 2 meet us. i wrote this poem in 1st year.
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Sep 2nd, 2009, 05:44 AM
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Join Date: Aug 29, 2009 - 3:41 am
Location: Karachi
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Mr.Lafanga
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Sep 2nd, 2009, 06:31 AM
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~*~ Tanha ~*~
Join Date: Apr 10, 2006 - 12:15 am
Location: Tripoli, Libya
Posts: 4,698
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very nice emotions shazia
Uss kay Dushman Hain Buhat Aadami Acha Hoga
Woh Bhi Meri He Tarah Shahar Mein Tanga Hoga
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Sep 2nd, 2009, 09:56 AM
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ofcourse i wrote it by my own self.
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Sep 3rd, 2009, 03:08 AM
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thank u sannan.
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Sep 4th, 2009, 02:05 AM
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Join Date: Aug 29, 2009 - 3:41 am
Location: Karachi
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Quote:
Originally Posted by shazia130
ofcourse i wrote it by my own self.
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Hmmmmmmmm Good very Good 
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Sep 16th, 2009, 10:53 AM
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Join Date: Jun 14, 2009 - 1:13 am
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thnak u L.L.
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Sep 17th, 2009, 07:19 PM
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Join Date: Sep 5, 2004 - 7:10 pm
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Nice One Shazia.. 
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Sep 18th, 2009, 05:17 AM
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thanx aryaan.
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Sep 18th, 2009, 05:46 AM
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Join Date: Nov 2, 2008 - 11:53 am
Location: Abu Dhabi
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Bohat khoob jee, Pardes men rehne walon ka sab se bara problem hi yahi he, anyhow nice work, keep it up.
Ishq samjhe the jise, wo tha bus narasai ka rishta
mere aur us ke darmian nikla umar bhar ki judai ka rishta.
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Sep 18th, 2009, 08:36 AM
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agree with u terrey naam.
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