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Sep 5th, 2009, 04:26 PM
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ایک غزل
بچھڑ کے تم سے ملی ھیں،اذیّتیں کیا کیا
زمانے بھر سے چلی ھیں عداوتیں کیا کیا
وفا کی چاہ میں جس پر بھی اعتبار کیا
صلے میں اُس سے ملی ھیں بغاوتیں کیا کیا
دلوں کے درد چھپانے کی پردہ داری میں
ھنسی کے روپ میں دیکھیں بناوٹیں کیا کیا
رہِ حیات میں جیون گزارنے کے لیئے
ھر اک مقام پہ لٹتی ھیں خواھشیں کیا کیا
خبر ھے، ھم نے تمھاری جفا کے بدلے میں
تمھار ے ساتھ نبھائیں محبّتیں کیا کیا ؟؟
زمین و زر کی ھوس نے ھر اک زمانے میں
رفاقتو ں میں عطا کیں رقابتیں کیا کیا
جبین ناز جھکائی تھی جسکے در پر ھی
اُسی نے بخشی ھیں غم کی عنایتیں کیا کیا
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suoz-e-firaaq,yaas-o-alam,iztraab-o-shuoq kis,kis k meny naaz othaay tamaam raat
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Sep 5th, 2009, 04:29 PM
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Firm Believer in Islam !!
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oh wow nice Naz .. 
Thanxxxxxxxxxxxxx for sharrring ...
btw , long time no see hw are you ..
"My dear heart never think you are better than others. Listen to their sorrows with compassion. If you want peace, don't harbour bad thoughts do not gossip and don't teach what you do not know." [Maulana Rumi]
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Sep 5th, 2009, 10:24 PM
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gud work naz.
Live 4 others.....chuchu
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Sep 7th, 2009, 04:27 PM
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MANY MANY THNX JNAB ..
ME FIN Alhamdulillaah Razaa
nd u ???
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Sep 8th, 2009, 12:30 AM
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Ghazal writing is very difficult and you have used cool words with a nice combination .... good
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Sep 8th, 2009, 01:05 AM
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igglepiggle!
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Very nice.
Huggle snuggle iggle piggle!
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Sep 8th, 2009, 08:01 AM
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Bohat Khoob Naz.. 
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Sep 9th, 2009, 05:11 PM
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THNX ALOT
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Sep 9th, 2009, 05:18 PM
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Firm Believer in Islam !!
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Mein teek hoon Allah ka Karam hai aap ki dua se ..
Aap sunaaen kesy hein sab Ghar waleyy .. kaam waghera ... kidss ... ap Gs nazar nahi aati ..masroofiyat shyd barh gaeii hein ?
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Sep 10th, 2009, 03:18 AM
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Junior Member
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hhhhhhhhhhhhmmmmmmmmm good work
Mr.Lafanga
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Sep 10th, 2009, 04:18 AM
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___ /\dR0It $LuMb3R ____
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Superb effort. Cheers
Life's a Mystery Yet to resolve, Joy's some where yet to discover
Mind's a universe yet to explore, Love's a sweet pain, for now and forever.
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Sep 15th, 2009, 04:46 PM
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thanx alot jnab .. ji raza kuchh buzy rhti hon ..thnx 4 asking
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