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Sep 7th, 2009, 06:50 AM
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Ikk dia timtimata raha shab bhar
Kuch khwabon ko jalata raha shab bhar
Katth putli ka tamasha thi zindagi
Chand putlian nachata raha shab bhar
Banawati muskurahat or khokhle qehqahe
Jhooti kahani kisse sunata raha shab bhar?
Aank micholi ka wo khel bara ajeeb tha
Ik khwab ankhon ko satata raha shab bhar
Uss sher main kuch to aisi baat thi
Wo ik misrah he gungunata raha shab bhar
Kuch naqsh ab bhi dil pe qnda hain
Ik shabih banata or mitata rha shab bhar
Wo baat jo kisi se na kahi thi ab tak
Phir yunhi kis se chupata raha shab bhar
Husn kya hai or iss ki haqiqat kya?
Ik heola sa behkata raha shab bhar
Sab bhool ja or chup chaap so ja
Ik kaghaz ka tukra,chnd ghaltan tahrirain
Maiz k kone pe pharphrata rha shab bhar...
Live 4 others.....chuchu
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Sep 7th, 2009, 07:19 AM
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hhhhhhhmm nice sharing
If time is not real, then the dividing line between this world and eternity, between suffering and bliss, between good and evil, is also an illusion.
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Sep 7th, 2009, 11:51 PM
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thanx maverick, kya itni mushkil hai jo sochna pra(hmmm)
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Sep 8th, 2009, 12:29 AM
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Vow simply fantastic .... shazia have you participated in poetry computations in school or colleges ????
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Sep 8th, 2009, 08:03 AM
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Bohat Khoob Shazia.. 
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Sep 8th, 2009, 10:30 AM
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thanx gypsi & aryaan.
no, i havn't participated any where bt have written many poems in urdu & english.
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Sep 9th, 2009, 05:32 AM
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 good g good
Mr.Lafanga
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Sep 9th, 2009, 08:54 AM
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thanx romio.
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Sep 11th, 2009, 11:26 AM
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very nice jee
Ishq samjhe the jise, wo tha bus narasai ka rishta
mere aur us ke darmian nikla umar bhar ki judai ka rishta.
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Sep 11th, 2009, 11:36 AM
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thank u terre naam & welcome to shora-e-gupshup.
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Sep 11th, 2009, 08:17 PM
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Moderator Poetry Forum
Join Date: Mar 9, 2006 - 6:35 am
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Bohat Khoob
Love is unconditional, relationships are not BeInG lOn3lY sId
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Sep 11th, 2009, 11:57 PM
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thanku sid, v happy 2 have u in this section.
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