Sep 23rd, 2009, 03:11 AM
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Kabhi jab yaad atay ho
Bohat he yaad atay ho
Ye jivan veeran pairh lagta hai
Ghamon ka dhair lagta hai
Kay jis ke pate aangan main
Be-simt se urte hain
Wo chup chaap meri tarah
Bichrna sehte rehte hain
Keh kab tak yaad ban kar tum
Inn sanson main sisko gay
Wo pyara saaz ban ker tum
Kaho kab tak yun chehko gay
Ye kya acha khyal hai
Kay tum ko bhool jaon main
Per la-chaar hun tab tak
Keh uljha khaar hun tab tak
Jo toota na chubh saka
Apni hasti bhi kho baitha
Wo jis pe phool haste hain
Keh ab hamwaar rste hain
Keh ab tum laot ao na
Keh ab tum laot ao na...
Live 4 others.....chuchu
Sep 23rd, 2009, 03:14 AM
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आपकी लाईन्*स बेहतरीन अहसास कराती हैं ........
Sep 23rd, 2009, 03:22 AM
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मैं अभी भी उन राहों पर
सूखे पत्*तों सा उड्ता हूं
जिन राहों पर आखिर बार
तुम मुझे तोड् कर फेंक गए
मेरी आंखों में तुम ही तुम
मेरी सांसों में तुम ही तुम
मुझे खबर नहीं ऐ जादूगर
तुम कैसे मुझको देख गए
देख कुछ भी तेरे बाद नहीं
तेरी याद से मैं आजाद नहीं
दिल शाद नहीं नाशाद नहीं
लिख दीवानगी के लेख गए
Sep 23rd, 2009, 11:35 AM
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i m sorry i m nt aware with this language bt any how thanx they must b the words of apreciation.
Sep 23rd, 2009, 11:37 AM
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Bohat achhey
Ishq samjhe the jise, wo tha bus narasai ka rishta
mere aur us ke darmian nikla umar bhar ki judai ka rishta.
Sep 23rd, 2009, 11:41 AM
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Raje Ji...it wud be better if u use roman urdu/hindi so ppl can read...here, most ppl can't read or write Hindi...i can and i helped u once but i can't help you everytime and its not that i dun wanna.
LEARN to write Roman Urdu
visit my thread in libguistic section
Sep 23rd, 2009, 04:13 PM
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Bohat Khoob
Shazia ..
Sep 24th, 2009, 12:56 AM
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thanx terre naam & aryaan.
Sep 24th, 2009, 01:05 AM
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if i m nt mistaken u r talkin 2 raje bt u haven't tell me tht how did u find my poem Hashmat?
Sep 24th, 2009, 11:02 PM
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Good Shazia G
Mr.Lafanga
Sep 25th, 2009, 05:23 AM
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thanx L.L.
Oct 7th, 2009, 07:42 AM
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Muhabbat Main Waapsi Ka Raasta Tou Hota Hee Nahi Hay
Nice Sharing Shazia :~)
Mukhtasir Lafzoo'n Main Hay Ab Yeh Mizaaj e Dosti
Raabta Sab Say Hay ' Laykin Wastaa Koi Naee'N
Oct 7th, 2009, 11:03 AM
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may b u r right khan bt ager sache dil se ho to rsta ho b skta hai.
Oct 7th, 2009, 09:31 PM
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nice
Jee Nahi Main nahi jaa rahi *snooty*
Oct 7th, 2009, 10:37 PM
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aik dil ko cho janay wali poem ..... shaiza u r sharing such a nice piece of ur poetry
Uss kay Dushman Hain Buhat Aadami Acha Hoga
Woh Bhi Meri He Tarah Shahar Mein Tanga Hoga
Oct 8th, 2009, 03:47 AM
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thank u so much sannan 4 likin.
Oct 8th, 2009, 03:48 AM
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nice
thank god ap ne at last mujhe dhoond he lia & thanx 4 likin.
Oct 18th, 2009, 02:11 PM
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very nice shazia
well done
cheers
Oct 19th, 2009, 01:44 AM
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thanku so much tahir.
Oct 21st, 2009, 10:00 AM
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very sad sad poetry shazia g ....
Chand Ka Kirdaar Apnaya Hay Hum Nay Doostoon
Dagh Apnay Pass Rakhay, Roshni Banta Kiye
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