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Old Sep 23rd, 2009, 04:43 AM   #1 (permalink)  
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मैं अभी भी उन राहों पर
सूखे पत्*ते सा उड्ता हूं
जिन राहों पर आखिर बार
तुम मुझे तोड् कर फेंक गए

मेरी आंखों में तुम ही तुम
मेरी सांसों में तुम ही तुम
मुझे खबर नहीं ऐ जादूगर
तुम कैसे मुझको देख गए

देख कुछ भी तेरे बाद नहीं
तेरी याद से मैं आजाद नहीं
दिल शाद नहीं नाशाद नहीं
लिख दीवानगी के लेख गए

हथेलियों में तलाशता रहता हूं
तुझसे रिश्तों की लकीरे मैं
थे कैसे गुनाह किए मैंने
कि मिट किस्मत के रेख गए

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Main abhi bhi un rahon par
sookhe patte sa udta hun
jin rahon par aakhir baar
tum mujhe tod kar phenk gaye

meri aankhon me tum hi tum
meri saanson me tum hi tum
mujhe khabar nahi ae jadugar
tum kaise mujhko dekh gaye

teri yaad se main azaad nahi
dil shaad nahi, naa'shaad nahi
dekh kuchh bhi tere baad nahi
likh diwangi ke laikh gaye

hatheliyon me talaashta rahta hun
tujh-se rishton ki laqiren main
the kaise gunaah kiye main'ey
ki mit kismat ke rekh gaye

*lekh - writings of luck, rekh - lines of furtune.

Inspired by : Shazia Arif







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Old Sep 24th, 2009, 12:23 PM   #2 (permalink)  
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Very nice. Baaz misrey waise itne wazan mein nahin, but over all good read.







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Old Sep 24th, 2009, 02:58 PM   #3 (permalink)  
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VERY NICE JNAB







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Old Sep 25th, 2009, 05:34 AM   #4 (permalink)  
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ab samajh main aya hai, nice & also surprised tht u r inspired by me???







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