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Old Sep 24th, 2009, 02:55 PM   #1 (permalink)  
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Meray Hamsafar,Meray Charar Gar

ye musafaten,ye kathin Safar

ye azal Say hen mery hamsafr

Mery Saath chalny k Shuoq men

kahin thak na jaain teray Qadam

Meray Hamsafar,Meray Charar Gar

kabhi manzilen mera khuaab thin

ju milin tu sirf Saraab thin

Rag,e jaan,o dil ka Azaab thin

Meray Hamsafar,Meray Charar Gar

Teri Saadgi,Teri Chaahaten

Mera maan hen,mera Naaz hen

Mujhy jaan say barh k Aziz hen

Meray Hamsafar,Meray Charar Gar

Teraa Sang hutaa ju Bakht men

Tu ye Raah baagh,o bahaar thhi

Meray es Safar ki Tapishh men

koi Saya daar Shajr nhin

jahaan ruk k thuri si der ham,ye thakan ye gard otaar len

Meray Hamsafar,Meray Charar Gar

Magr es Safar ki dhoop men

mery Saath jhulsen Tery Qadam

ye kabhi gawaara nhin mujhy

ye hi hijr Apna Nseeb hay

Meray Hamsafar,Meray Charar Gar

Teri Zindagi ki Mujhy Qasam

k ye Tishnigi k Safar men Ab

Teri yaad hugi Qadam Qadam

Teray lafz hen Mera husla,Teray Sher mery hen Rahbar

Meray Hamsafar,Meray Charar Gar


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nicely written and flow is there.
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aik taveel leekan qari ka irtikaaz na totnay wali nazam .....






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Uss kay Dushman Hain Buhat Aadami Acha Hoga
Woh Bhi Meri He Tarah Shahar Mein Tanga Hoga
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bas ek manzil hai bul_havas kii hazaar raste hain ahal-e-dil ke
ye hii to hai farq mujh main us main guzar gayaa main Thahar gayaa vo
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Aik Taveeeeeeeeeeellllllllllllllllllllllllll leekan khoubsurat nazam
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