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Old Sep 25th, 2009, 08:45 AM   #1 (permalink)  
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Tere gham ki hifazat kaise karun
Sab aankhon me pad'h letain hain

Meri aankhon ne dekhi ranzish
Ab elzaam mujhe sab detain hain

Yaad ye unki kucchh na kaho
Hum, naam bhi dar kar letain hain

deewano se poochho na kuchh
diwaane to chup hi rahte hain

Unsay to wafa ki ummeed hai kam
Sar maut ke dar par detain hai
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Nice One Rajey...
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Old Sep 26th, 2009, 10:54 AM   #3 (permalink)  
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good one,waise ap blank verse(azaad nazm) kay ilawa b acha likh lete hain.






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hmmmm achi koshish ....






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