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Sep 27th, 2009, 03:47 AM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jun 14, 2009 - 1:13 am
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Ik chaand nagar main aya tha
Jo hansa tha ithlaya tha
Phir yun hua ik chakori behki
Jab uss ne pas bulaya tha
Wo kharama khrama chalta raha
Kabhi pani,kabhi pathar
Kabhi gahri khwabeeda aankhain
Kabhi dil pe aks banaya tha
Wo kitna roshan roshan tha
Chahe rukh pe daagh sajaya tha
Ik tehni pe udaas bulbul thi
Wo apna chehkna bhool gai
Per usko geet sunaya tha
Pani main hui jaltarang
Jab lehron pe aks banaya tha
Phir dheere se muskaa dena
Or chand se tashbih must-ar lena
Ik khol charha kay chehre pe
Phir kisko pagal banaya tha
Iss nagar main charsoo andhera kiun hai
Jis nagar main chaand kabhi aya tha...
Live 4 others.....chuchu
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Sep 28th, 2009, 11:49 PM
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#2 (permalink)
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Join Date: Nov 1, 2006 - 4:52 am
Posts: 345
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buhat gahri nazam likhi aap nay .... itni achi nazam likhnay par mubarkbad wasool karain ....
Chand Ka Kirdaar Apnaya Hay Hum Nay Doostoon
Dagh Apnay Pass Rakhay, Roshni Banta Kiye
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Sep 29th, 2009, 04:15 AM
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#3 (permalink)
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Join Date: Sep 19, 2009 - 8:46 am
Location: Bhopal, India
Posts: 123
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ek nazm si bahti rahti hai,
mere ahsaason ke parde me
mujhme hai, aur mujhse nihan
ye rooh benaami cheej hai kya
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Sep 29th, 2009, 06:01 AM
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Join Date: Sep 25, 2009 - 3:45 am
Posts: 40
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Quote:
Originally Posted by rajey
ek nazm si bahti rahti hai,
mere ahsaason ke parde me
mujhme hai, aur mujhse nihan
ye rooh benaami cheej hai kya
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abe kya **** poetry hai yeh !!!!!!!
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Sep 29th, 2009, 10:24 AM
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Join Date: Jun 14, 2009 - 1:13 am
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thanku so much gypsi & rajey.
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Sep 29th, 2009, 10:25 AM
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Join Date: Jun 14, 2009 - 1:13 am
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Quote:
Originally Posted by gypsy_lonely
buhat gahri nazam likhi aap nay .... itni achi nazam likhnay par mubarkbad wasool karain ....
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jb tak comments nahi mile thay to bilkul gahri nai lagi.
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Sep 29th, 2009, 11:21 PM
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Member
Join Date: Nov 1, 2006 - 4:52 am
Posts: 345
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Shazia Arif
jb tak comments nahi mile thay to bilkul gahri nai lagi.
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Actually it depends on Reader as well that how he/she taking the poetry ........ so feelings play basic role ......
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Sep 30th, 2009, 03:24 AM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jun 14, 2009 - 1:13 am
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Quote:
Originally Posted by gypsy_lonely
Actually it depends on Reader as well that how he/she taking the poetry ........ so feelings play basic role ......
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agreed agreed!!!
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