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Sep 29th, 2009, 09:51 AM
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Senior Citizen
Join Date: Apr 13, 2007 - 5:38 am
Location: Karachi
Posts: 15,603
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Meri 2 Poems Jo Aik He Zameen Pe Likhi Hain Mainay, Socha Aik Saath Share Ker Doon..
(1)
Ek Teray Rooth Janay Se
Saari Dunya Khafa Si Lagti Hai
Jab Hon Chaaron Taraf Ye Sannatay
Dil Ki Dharkan Sada Si Lagti Hai
Her Samay Jab Azaab Utrain Tou
Zindagi Khud Qaza Si Lagti Hai
Aise Lamhay Pe Teray Honton Per
Muskurahat Duaa Si Lagti Hai
Sochna Tum Ko, Tum Ko Sochtay Rehna
Ye Aadat Bhi Dil-Ruba Si Lagti Hai
Teri Aankhon Main Saadgi Itni
Kion Tuu Sab Se Juda Si Lagti Hai
(2)
Teray Honton Pe Itni Khamoshi
Aur Aankhon Main Ek Sada Si Lagti Hai
Kion Tuu Hans Bol Ke Nahi Milti
Kion Tuu Mujh Se Khafa Si Lagti Hai
Teri Aankhain Sada Ki Qaatil Hain
Inn Main Her Damm Qaza Si Lagti Hai
Teray Aanchal Ke Saa-ay Main Bethoon
Iss Khushboo, Hina Si Lagti Hai
Teray Aanay Se Phool Khiltay Hain
Kitni Dilkash Fiza Si Lagti Hai
Teri Guftaar Main Hai Sheereeni
Aur Lehjay Main Ek Adaa Si Lagti Hai
(Ahmer)
Umeed Hai Aap Logon Ko Pasand Aye Gi..
Regards,
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Sep 29th, 2009, 10:31 AM
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#2 (permalink)
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jun 14, 2009 - 1:13 am
Posts: 556
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v true ahmer, waqi main boht achi hai.
Live 4 others.....chuchu
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Sep 29th, 2009, 11:23 PM
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#3 (permalink)
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Member
Join Date: Nov 1, 2006 - 4:52 am
Posts: 345
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buhat khoub G ..... Maza aaya parh kar
Chand Ka Kirdaar Apnaya Hay Hum Nay Doostoon
Dagh Apnay Pass Rakhay, Roshni Banta Kiye
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Sep 30th, 2009, 04:00 AM
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#4 (permalink)
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Miss Annoying
Join Date: Aug 13, 2009 - 3:04 am
Posts: 21,672
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pretty nice 
Jee Nahi Main nahi jaa rahi *snooty*
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Sep 30th, 2009, 02:28 PM
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#5 (permalink)
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Member
Join Date: Aug 31, 2008 - 11:02 pm
Location: Never Never Land of Peterpan
Posts: 421
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Very Nice 
Meri Pehchaan...Mera Piyara Pakistan!... Long Live Pakistan!...
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Oct 2nd, 2009, 09:22 AM
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#6 (permalink)
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Senior Member
Join Date: Apr 30, 2007 - 8:36 am
Posts: 2,550
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boht khob 
AfTeR LoSiNg yOu i mIsS YoUr sMiLe a lOt bUt i mIsS My oWn sMiLe mOrE
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Oct 6th, 2009, 04:28 AM
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#7 (permalink)
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~*~ Tanha ~*~
Join Date: Apr 10, 2006 - 12:15 am
Location: Tripoli, Libya
Posts: 4,698
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nice poetry
Uss kay Dushman Hain Buhat Aadami Acha Hoga
Woh Bhi Meri He Tarah Shahar Mein Tanga Hoga
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Oct 6th, 2009, 05:16 AM
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#8 (permalink)
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Member
Join Date: Sep 19, 2009 - 8:46 am
Location: Bhopal, India
Posts: 121
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Quote:
Originally Posted by redidentity
Sochna Tum Ko, Tum Ko Sochtay Rehna
Ye Aadat Bhi Dil-Ruba Si Lagti Hai
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Kya imotions hain!!
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