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Oct 1st, 2009, 02:24 AM
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[SIZE=2]Ik sahil tha or main thi
Chend ghaltan sochain or main thi
Mere qadmon kay nishan to mubhim thay
Lehrain,rait or main thi
Ik la-haasil talash
Ya manzil,saibaan or main thi
Mera wajood raiza raiza
Kuch khwabon ki kirchian or main thi
Iss yaad ko yaad kya kerna
Jis yaad ki yaad main thi
Kuch lamhe kitne bhari hain
Jin lamhon ka bojh main thi
Hawa numm ya shayad afsurda bhi
Do bheegi aankhain or main thi
Haath phelaye per maanga kuch nhi
Bheegi hatheli or main thi
Meri zaat to khuli kitaab si hai
CHEND ARZAAN QARI OR MAIN THI...
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Live 4 others.....chuchu
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Oct 1st, 2009, 02:59 AM
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Join Date: Nov 1, 2006 - 4:52 am
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Ik sahil tha or main thi
Chend ghaltan sochain or main thi
Mere qadmon kay nishan to mubhim thay
Lehrain,rait or main thi
Buhat shahdaar shazi G , mujhay yah lines buhat pasand aain ...... keep it up
Chand Ka Kirdaar Apnaya Hay Hum Nay Doostoon
Dagh Apnay Pass Rakhay, Roshni Banta Kiye
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Oct 1st, 2009, 11:30 AM
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thanx gypsi 4 likin.
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Oct 2nd, 2009, 09:46 AM
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Join Date: Sep 19, 2009 - 8:46 am
Location: Bhopal, India
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Mera wajood raiza raiza
Kuch khwabon ki kirchian or main thi
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Ye lines hum e khhoooob pasand aaiyin..
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Oct 2nd, 2009, 10:29 AM
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thanku so much rajey.
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Oct 2nd, 2009, 06:35 PM
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Bohat Khoob Shazia.. 
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Oct 3rd, 2009, 12:06 PM
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thanx aryaan.
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Oct 5th, 2009, 05:39 AM
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~*~ Tanha ~*~
Join Date: Apr 10, 2006 - 12:15 am
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very nice Shazia .....
Uss kay Dushman Hain Buhat Aadami Acha Hoga
Woh Bhi Meri He Tarah Shahar Mein Tanga Hoga
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Oct 5th, 2009, 09:33 AM
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Senior Member
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thanx sannan & welcome bck.
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Oct 7th, 2009, 07:49 AM
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Join Date: Aug 19, 2005 - 8:57 am
Location: Karachi
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Shazia Arif
Ik sahil tha or main thi
Chend ghaltan sochain or main thi
Meri zaat to khuli kitaab si hai
CHEND ARZAAN QARI OR MAIN THI...
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Will U Kindly Explain This ???
Mukhtasir Lafzoo'n Main Hay Ab Yeh Mizaaj e Dosti Raabta Sab Say Hay ' Laykin Wastaa Koi Naee'N
Last edited by Precious^Khan; Oct 7th, 2009 at 07:54 AM..
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Oct 7th, 2009, 11:13 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Precious^Khan
Will U Kindly Explain This ???
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ghaltan means uljha hua,arzaan:sasta,qari: reader.
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Oct 21st, 2009, 02:50 AM
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KILLER say's
Join Date: Jul 15, 2008 - 7:33 am
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wat shud i say ..kuch b kehoo ga to i know u gonna hurt some how ....but bht gazbati poem thi .... the best ov ur collection.
meri chahtoo ka kya sila dayga " Jane-B-khabar " uski ek awaz pe zindagi mita doo bas............. " ITNI HAI MERI MUHABBAT"
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Oct 21st, 2009, 10:09 AM
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thanx sarmad bt mai pagal nai hoon k be-tukka mind ker jaon.
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Oct 21st, 2009, 11:46 AM
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KILLER say's
Join Date: Jul 15, 2008 - 7:33 am
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hehe.........chalo yeah to gud gud hai phrr
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