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Old Oct 1st, 2009, 02:24 AM   #1 (permalink)  
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[SIZE=2]Ik sahil tha or main thi
Chend ghaltan sochain or main thi
Mere qadmon kay nishan to mubhim thay
Lehrain,rait or main thi
Ik la-haasil talash
Ya manzil,saibaan or main thi
Mera wajood raiza raiza
Kuch khwabon ki kirchian or main thi
Iss yaad ko yaad kya kerna
Jis yaad ki yaad main thi
Kuch lamhe kitne bhari hain
Jin lamhon ka bojh main thi
Hawa numm ya shayad afsurda bhi
Do bheegi aankhain or main thi
Haath phelaye per maanga kuch nhi
Bheegi hatheli or main thi
Meri zaat to khuli kitaab si hai
CHEND ARZAAN QARI OR MAIN THI...
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Live 4 others.....chuchu
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Old Oct 1st, 2009, 02:59 AM   #2 (permalink)  
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Ik sahil tha or main thi
Chend ghaltan sochain or main thi
Mere qadmon kay nishan to mubhim thay
Lehrain,rait or main thi


Buhat shahdaar shazi G , mujhay yah lines buhat pasand aain ...... keep it up







Chand Ka Kirdaar Apnaya Hay Hum Nay Doostoon
Dagh Apnay Pass Rakhay, Roshni Banta Kiye
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Old Oct 1st, 2009, 11:30 AM   #3 (permalink)  
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thanx gypsi 4 likin.






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Old Oct 2nd, 2009, 09:46 AM   #4 (permalink)  
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Mera wajood raiza raiza
Kuch khwabon ki kirchian or main thi
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Ye lines hum e khhoooob pasand aaiyin..






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Old Oct 2nd, 2009, 10:29 AM   #5 (permalink)  
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thanku so much rajey.






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Old Oct 2nd, 2009, 06:35 PM   #6 (permalink)  
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Bohat Khoob Shazia..






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Old Oct 3rd, 2009, 12:06 PM   #7 (permalink)  
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thanx aryaan.






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Old Oct 5th, 2009, 05:39 AM   #8 (permalink)  
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very nice Shazia .....







Uss kay Dushman Hain Buhat Aadami Acha Hoga
Woh Bhi Meri He Tarah Shahar Mein Tanga Hoga
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Old Oct 5th, 2009, 09:33 AM   #9 (permalink)  
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thanx sannan & welcome bck.






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Old Oct 7th, 2009, 07:49 AM   #10 (permalink)  
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Ik sahil tha or main thi
Chend ghaltan sochain or main thi
Meri zaat to khuli kitaab si hai
CHEND ARZAAN QARI OR MAIN THI...

Will U Kindly Explain This ???







Mukhtasir Lafzoo'n Main Hay Ab Yeh Mizaaj e Dosti
Raabta Sab Say Hay ' Laykin Wastaa Koi Naee'N

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Will U Kindly Explain This ???
ghaltan means uljha hua,arzaan:sasta,qari: reader.






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Old Oct 21st, 2009, 02:50 AM   #12 (permalink)  
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wat shud i say ..kuch b kehoo ga to i know u gonna hurt some how ....but bht gazbati poem thi .... the best ov ur collection.







meri chahtoo ka kya sila dayga " Jane-B-khabar "
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bas............. " ITNI HAI MERI MUHABBAT"
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Old Oct 21st, 2009, 10:09 AM   #13 (permalink)  
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thanx sarmad bt mai pagal nai hoon k be-tukka mind ker jaon.






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Old Oct 21st, 2009, 11:46 AM   #14 (permalink)  
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hehe.........chalo yeah to gud gud hai phrr






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