Unguarded word.....think before u speak!

saadat tahir · Oct 5th, 2009, 03:41 PM

[SIZE=3]Unguarded word, befriended bird.
Weighted fell by thrice or third.
Dusty grind, millers churn.
Pummel ears, murmurs burn.

Mongered word off china town,
bamboos morph to fretting frown.
Snared enmeshed, wasted sage,
bowl of death at generous age.

Placid morns to sullied days,
rancid slicks on sandy bays.
Bubbly sprays dash and bounce,
buffet sighs in crannies trounce.

Tongues to airs, wings have lent.
Hath words to many, a gallows sent.
Deadened eyes to rainbows womb,
spured fear to tear to life entomb.

Strongest will and hardy soul.
Char and writhe on carmine coal.
Words said, unsaid, worlds apart.
Volley’s sent, will raze ramparts
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saadat tahir
Islamabad
(Aug 01, 2009)

Sannan · Oct 6th, 2009, 04:26 AM

acha kalam ....

saadat tahir · Oct 8th, 2009, 07:20 AM

thanx g...
so nice
am honoured

cheers

Shazia Arif · Oct 8th, 2009, 11:00 AM

it is gud 2 read saadat.
in 1st stanza it was lukin like w.wordsworth's piece of poetry bt the remainin is like keat's. so v gud 2 hve the combination of 2 poets.

saadat tahir · Oct 15th, 2009, 08:10 AM

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Originally Posted by Shazia Arif

it is gud 2 read saadat.
in 1st stanza it was lukin like w.wordsworth's piece of poetry bt the remainin is like keat's. so v gud 2 hve the combination of 2 poets.

Hi..shazia.... i scarce deserve the comparisson ....flattering and elvating none the less ...and thank YOU.
i am honoured and feel privileged by ur largesse...

cheers