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Oct 9th, 2009, 11:36 AM
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Kaghaz pe likha ik naam anjana
Jo likha or phir phaar dia
Kya lena mujhe inn yadon se
Jo rooh ko kichoke deti hain
Jo hijar ki thandi raton main
Aankhon main jalan le ati hain
Sab yaadon,waadon,muraadon ko
Ikk qabar banai gaarr dia
Khagaz pe lkha ik naam anjana
Jo likha or phir phaar dia
Mai ne nange paon angaaron pe
Hole se chal kay dekha hai
Tapte sehra ki rait ko bhi
Muthi main daba kay dekha hai
Per dil ki jalan ajeeb si hai
Kuch uljhi be-tarteeb si hai
Jis ne sehraa ki rait ko bhi
Angaaron ki tapish or saik ko bhi
Jhutlaya bhi or maat dia
Kaghaz pe likha ikk naam anjana
Jo lkha or phir phaar dia...
Live 4 others.....chuchu
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Oct 9th, 2009, 01:21 PM
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#2 (permalink)
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Senior Member
Join Date: Nov 2, 2008 - 11:53 am
Location: Abu Dhabi
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Bohat khoob
Ishq samjhe the jise, wo tha bus narasai ka rishta
mere aur us ke darmian nikla umar bhar ki judai ka rishta.
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Oct 9th, 2009, 01:24 PM
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SaNa ds *MaGiC oF BeAuTy*
Join Date: May 11, 2009 - 6:25 am
Location: dubai
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!!!!!!!TAkdeer SY ZAIDA AUR NaSeEb SE kam,,KABHI KISI KO zAiDa YaN KaM NAI MILTA!!!!!!!!
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Oct 10th, 2009, 06:31 AM
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Join Date: Jun 14, 2009 - 1:13 am
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thanku sana & terre naam.
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Oct 11th, 2009, 12:12 AM
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KILLER say's
Join Date: Jul 15, 2008 - 7:33 am
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v nice
meri chahtoo ka kya sila dayga " Jane-B-khabar " uski ek awaz pe zindagi mita doo bas............. " ITNI HAI MERI MUHABBAT"
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Oct 11th, 2009, 07:42 AM
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Join Date: Jun 14, 2009 - 1:13 am
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thanku v much sarmad.
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Oct 11th, 2009, 08:45 AM
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KILLER say's
Join Date: Jul 15, 2008 - 7:33 am
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u r welcome shazia .. u r v good poet .... v good balance .. r u a professional poet .... or like me ...
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Oct 11th, 2009, 09:42 AM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jun 14, 2009 - 1:13 am
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not professional at all bus gs pe he post kerti hoon.
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Oct 11th, 2009, 11:56 AM
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KILLER say's
Join Date: Jul 15, 2008 - 7:33 am
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oh i c .... so where u from ??
kya kerte ho app ??
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Oct 11th, 2009, 12:08 PM
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Join Date: Aug 31, 2009 - 3:25 pm
Location: pluto
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funtastic
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Oct 11th, 2009, 10:40 PM
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Join Date: Sep 5, 2004 - 7:10 pm
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Bohat hi khoob Shazia.. 
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Oct 12th, 2009, 10:50 AM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jun 14, 2009 - 1:13 am
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thanx aryaan & bilbatori.
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Oct 12th, 2009, 10:53 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by bilbatori
funtastic
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v cute name, i watched the serial by the name of ainak wala jin in my child hood & 1 of its character's name ws bilbatori.
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