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Old Oct 13th, 2009, 02:29 AM   #1 (permalink)  
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ghurb hotey huway aftab ki manind


bichar ker usne tabiat udas ker dali


woh umer jis main hamien khud se milna tha


woh basar uski talash main ker dali






* hey dnt hit d love*
ur fight is vit me so why u r enmy of love
*LOVE IS INOCENT*
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Old Oct 13th, 2009, 05:14 AM   #2 (permalink)  
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heart touching poetry .........






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Old Oct 13th, 2009, 05:24 AM   #3 (permalink)  
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nice but u need refining...Khayaal nazm kaa achchhaa hai...magar yeh talaash maHboob kii nahiIN Khud kii hotii to ziyaada behtar hotaa nice...keep trying






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Old Oct 13th, 2009, 05:37 AM   #4 (permalink)  
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hehe,,,,ek or shayiar paida ho giya ....hehe


v v v nice






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Old Oct 13th, 2009, 07:44 AM   #5 (permalink)  
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v nice bt mujhe aisa q lag raha hai k i heard it b4?






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