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Oct 13th, 2009, 05:26 PM
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KILLER say's
Join Date: Jul 15, 2008 - 7:33 am
Posts: 4,562
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mai agr ankhoo mai jo
tjh ko aise sma loo
apne dil ko
tere kadmoo mai dal dooo
to bolo inaam mai
apne dil
mai reko gi kya tum
or mai agrr
tmhe is qadar jo
piyar dooo
k khud ko tm pe jo
nichar doo
rekh k haath mere dil pe
yeah wada do
k kroo gi piyar tum b mjhe .
or kabhi teri be-rukhi
sangdili se jo
tang aa krr apni zindagi har doo
to btayoo nah..
itna to kroo gi
jo ho ga rati bhar piyar
bhi tmhre dil main
to chali ayoo gi
mrii qabar prr tum..
or bha krr do ansoo ..
amar krr doo gi mrii mubhat ko tum ..
or go nah piyar tumhe to
kroo yeah ehad k nibhaoo gi tum ...
k mjhe bhool hi jayoo gi tum ...........(zia)
meri chahtoo ka kya sila dayga " Jane-B-khabar " uski ek awaz pe zindagi mita doo bas............. " ITNI HAI MERI MUHABBAT"
Last edited by sarmad786; Oct 13th, 2009 at 07:35 PM..
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Oct 13th, 2009, 08:19 PM
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Miss Annoying
Join Date: Aug 13, 2009 - 3:04 am
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Jee Nahi Main nahi jaa rahi *snooty*
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Oct 14th, 2009, 07:03 AM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jun 14, 2009 - 1:13 am
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nice bt ap hamaisha blank verse he q likhte hai?
how stupid i m tht askin this question.
Live 4 others.....chuchu
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Oct 14th, 2009, 07:23 AM
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KILLER say's
Join Date: Jul 15, 2008 - 7:33 am
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just random yaar .... koi khas waja nhi .......jo dil mai hota hai likh daita hoo .... i m not a proper poet .....mai to bas apne emotions ko paper pe utarta hoo thats it ...simple
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Oct 15th, 2009, 12:03 AM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jun 14, 2009 - 1:13 am
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wht do u mean by yaar?mujhe ap ka andaz-e-takhatub pasand nai aya, agar main ap ko comment kerti hoon to jst bcoz of ur post or kuch nai.
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Oct 15th, 2009, 12:37 AM
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KILLER say's
Join Date: Jul 15, 2008 - 7:33 am
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yaar mean friend.... watelse ...every1 one on this forum is a friend ... koi enemy thora hai .... i dnt know app ko ky apasand nhi aya......anywyz sorry .... it was not intended.
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Oct 15th, 2009, 12:43 AM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jun 14, 2009 - 1:13 am
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i m nt v conservative bt sumtimes sum words hurt me,i think i m v introverd & cultured.
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Oct 15th, 2009, 02:12 AM
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Miss Annoying
Join Date: Aug 13, 2009 - 3:04 am
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blank verse ka mutlub?
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Oct 15th, 2009, 11:13 AM
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KILLER say's
Join Date: Jul 15, 2008 - 7:33 am
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Shazia Arif
i m nt v conservative bt sumtimes sum words hurt me,i think i m v introverd & cultured.
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seriously ..i had no intention to hurt u .. its just i m from lahore so sometimes i get verve thats it .... yaar is a very common word there.....so got use of it . Sorrry ... no hard feelings plz ... i will try no to use that word infurture specially against u .
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Oct 15th, 2009, 11:39 AM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jun 14, 2009 - 1:13 am
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its ok sarmad.
blank verse means azaad nazam.
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Oct 15th, 2009, 02:26 PM
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KILLER say's
Join Date: Jul 15, 2008 - 7:33 am
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thanks alot SHAZIA.
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