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Old Oct 16th, 2009, 12:54 PM   #1 (permalink)  
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Sab khwahishain tishna qaam
Kuch sab adhoori
Kuch be-anjaam
Wo nigahon ki saraseemgi
Wo chehre ka tanao
Wo hasratain dil ki
Wo jazbaat ka bahao
Wo seedhi bat pe chapkalish-e-natamam
Sab khwahishain tishna kaam
Har pathar chaq maaq nahi
Kuch zehar aise bhi hain
Jin ka bad-e-mehar,taryaaq nhi
Phir jhooti baton ko sach man-na
Muqfil hont,muqfil aankhain
Har suqam ko daanista taalna
Ik kaali raat ya bam dadaan
Sab khwahishain tishna qaam...







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Old Oct 16th, 2009, 01:52 PM   #2 (permalink)  
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Old Oct 17th, 2009, 12:14 AM   #3 (permalink)  
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thank u so much sid.






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Old Oct 21st, 2009, 02:57 AM   #4 (permalink)  
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Sab khwahishain tishna qaam
..........
..........be-anjaam
....nigahon ki saraseemgi
....

Phir jhooti baton ko sach man-na..
Muqfil hont,muqfil aankhain..
Har suqam ko daanista taalna..
Ik kaali raat ya bam dadaan..
Sab khwahishain tishna qaam...
Shazia Ji u can be do better and more clear with these words and sentiments..






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Old Oct 21st, 2009, 10:34 AM   #5 (permalink)  
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sory haven't get ur point,can u plz clear it?






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Old Oct 22nd, 2009, 01:54 AM   #6 (permalink)  
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Sab khwahishain tishna qaam

yah que hay ya Gee ..g ??????







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Old Oct 22nd, 2009, 10:37 AM   #7 (permalink)  
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Sab khwahishain tishna qaam

yah que hay ya Gee ..g ??????
yeh kya spansh likh di hai?haven't get ur point.






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Old Nov 3rd, 2009, 01:15 AM   #8 (permalink)  
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simply cool







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thanx gypsi hve seen u after v long time.






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Old Nov 4th, 2009, 08:52 AM   #10 (permalink)  
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yeh kya spansh likh di hai?haven't get ur point.
What he means is, have u used letter 'G' or a 'Q' in tishna qaam...
I think its a g. tishna gaam.
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Old Nov 5th, 2009, 04:55 AM   #11 (permalink)  
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What he means is, have u used letter 'G' or a 'Q' in tishna qaam...
I think its a g. tishna gaam.
That's all.
bt i hve read it "tishna qaam"






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