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Oct 16th, 2009, 12:54 PM
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Sab khwahishain tishna qaam
Kuch sab adhoori
Kuch be-anjaam
Wo nigahon ki saraseemgi
Wo chehre ka tanao
Wo hasratain dil ki
Wo jazbaat ka bahao
Wo seedhi bat pe chapkalish-e-natamam
Sab khwahishain tishna kaam
Har pathar chaq maaq nahi
Kuch zehar aise bhi hain
Jin ka bad-e-mehar,taryaaq nhi
Phir jhooti baton ko sach man-na
Muqfil hont,muqfil aankhain
Har suqam ko daanista taalna
Ik kaali raat ya bam dadaan
Sab khwahishain tishna qaam...
Live 4 others.....chuchu
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Oct 16th, 2009, 01:52 PM
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Moderator Poetry Forum
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kya kehne umda umda 
Love is unconditional, relationships are not BeInG lOn3lY sId
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Oct 17th, 2009, 12:14 AM
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thank u so much sid.
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Oct 21st, 2009, 02:57 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Shazia Arif
Sab khwahishain tishna qaam
..........
..........be-anjaam
....nigahon ki saraseemgi
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Phir jhooti baton ko sach man-na..
Muqfil hont,muqfil aankhain..
Har suqam ko daanista taalna..
Ik kaali raat ya bam dadaan..
Sab khwahishain tishna qaam...
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Shazia Ji u can be do better and more clear with these words and sentiments..
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Oct 21st, 2009, 10:34 AM
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sory haven't get ur point,can u plz clear it?
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Oct 22nd, 2009, 01:54 AM
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~*~ Tanha ~*~
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Sab khwahishain tishna qaam
yah que hay ya Gee ..g ??????
Uss kay Dushman Hain Buhat Aadami Acha Hoga
Woh Bhi Meri He Tarah Shahar Mein Tanga Hoga
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Oct 22nd, 2009, 10:37 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Sannan
Sab khwahishain tishna qaam
yah que hay ya Gee ..g ??????
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yeh kya spansh likh di hai?haven't get ur point.
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Nov 3rd, 2009, 01:15 AM
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simply cool
Chand Ka Kirdaar Apnaya Hay Hum Nay Doostoon
Dagh Apnay Pass Rakhay, Roshni Banta Kiye
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Nov 4th, 2009, 08:30 AM
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thanx gypsi hve seen u after v long time.
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Nov 4th, 2009, 08:52 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Shazia Arif
yeh kya spansh likh di hai?haven't get ur point.
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What he means is, have u used letter 'G' or a 'Q' in tishna qaam...
I think its a g. tishna gaam.
That's all. 
Life's a Mystery Yet to resolve, Joy's some where yet to discover
Mind's a universe yet to explore, Love's a sweet pain, for now and forever.
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Nov 5th, 2009, 04:55 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by COLD_FIRE
What he means is, have u used letter 'G' or a 'Q' in tishna qaam...
I think its a g. tishna gaam.
That's all. 
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bt i hve read it "tishna qaam"
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