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Oct 19th, 2009, 01:47 AM
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Chehron ke hujoom mai wo chehra kahan se dhundoon
Wo iltefaat jo maskan tha kabhi,ab kahan se dhundoon
Kabhi koi hed darja mukhlis mila he nahin
Wo lehje ki hilawat,mukhlisi ka paikar kahan se dhundhoon
Main be-bas or zindagi se aari hoon
Jo zindagi ka matlab bta de wo maseeha kahan se dhundhoon
Ya rabb mujh se meri farzangi cheen le
Iss deewangi mai reh ke kiun na apna aap dhundoon
Mere qadam larkhrai or bhatak se gay
Wo manzil to kabhi mili he nahi
jis ke nishan dar nishan dhundhoon
SHAZ he koi jia hai bherpoor zindagi ZIA
Wo zindagi he kya jis mai zindagi dhundoon...
Live 4 others.....chuchu
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Oct 20th, 2009, 03:42 AM
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KILLER say's
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v nice ...indeed ....bht umdha.
meri chahtoo ka kya sila dayga " Jane-B-khabar " uski ek awaz pe zindagi mita doo bas............. " ITNI HAI MERI MUHABBAT"
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Oct 20th, 2009, 10:43 AM
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thanku so much sarmad 4 apreciation,
let me ask u k bohat jaldi nazar nai perh gai?
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Oct 20th, 2009, 11:09 AM
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KILLER say's
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sorry !! i didnt get ur meanings ? kuch wazhat chahiyee plz .
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Oct 20th, 2009, 11:42 AM
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i mean 3 din se post ki hui hai.
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Oct 20th, 2009, 11:56 AM
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KILLER say's
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oh u r wr waiting for my appreciation .... sorry thori dair ho gi ...
but v nice ....
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Oct 20th, 2009, 12:41 PM
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infact 4 everyone's apreceation.
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Oct 20th, 2009, 12:58 PM
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KILLER say's
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oh then i think ...mai thori jaldi aa giya ...
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Oct 20th, 2009, 10:35 PM
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~*~ Tanha ~*~
Join Date: Apr 10, 2006 - 12:15 am
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Chehron ke hujoom mai wo chehra kahan se dhundoon
another classic from Shazia ...... hey apni poetry ko urdu fonts mein likho inpage mein to ziyada maza day gi ....... ittni sari poetry hay koi kitabi shakal dainay key koshish karo ....
Uss kay Dushman Hain Buhat Aadami Acha Hoga
Woh Bhi Meri He Tarah Shahar Mein Tanga Hoga
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Oct 21st, 2009, 12:43 AM
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i don't hve inpage bt inshallah wil publish my buk soon, waitin 4 my father 2 come 2 pakistan phir kuch krun gi inshallah.
& thanx 4 apreciation.
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Oct 21st, 2009, 12:50 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by sarmad786
oh u r wr waiting for my appreciation .... sorry thori dair ho gi ...
but v nice ....
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thanx bt can i ask k ap ko itni khush fehmi kiun hai.
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Oct 21st, 2009, 01:21 AM
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KILLER say's
Join Date: Jul 15, 2008 - 7:33 am
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mai aisa hi hoo .... waise khush fehmi inti b burii baat nahi hai ... hmmm
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Oct 21st, 2009, 10:03 AM
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Member
Join Date: Nov 1, 2006 - 4:52 am
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u alwaz do sad poetry ..... although it feels nice but try to do some energetic poetry as well .......
Chand Ka Kirdaar Apnaya Hay Hum Nay Doostoon
Dagh Apnay Pass Rakhay, Roshni Banta Kiye
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Oct 21st, 2009, 10:28 AM
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thanku gypsi bt thru sad & serious poetry u can express ur feelins in more better way.
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